I don't think anyone noticed but one of Naruto's and sakura's kids had a Byakugan seal on his forehead! HOW THE FUCK DID THAT HAPPEN!?

man that was weird but u killed Naruto WHY that ruined the whole story well it was still good minus Naruto dying

this was good i cried reading this.

Despite the grammar mistakes I liked the story.

Horrible English.

I'm torn between saying that this is good, or awful. The spelling mistakes coupled with the grammar mistakes nearly gave me an aneurysm, and while the story is well thought out it was painful to read. Take a few minutes next time and sit down with a dictionary and a thesaurus before you post.

This was god level like super mega cool tho I don't fully understand what happened differently for Naruto to die Sakura was not the one to save him it was the sage and Obito

it was good, but the grammar mistakes made it almost painful to read