Reviews for One Imaginary Outing
LilacPetals21 chapter 10 . 1/28/2017
This was a beautiful story! Definitely one of the best StarNerve stories i've read, great job!
I was wondering if you could write a Brickoli story too? I would love to see them in your style.
StarNerve chapter 10 . 10/11/2016
Beautiful! Now, let's see that epilogue. :D
DanniB chapter 10 . 10/11/2016
Aww this was so cute. I'm so happy they worked things out.
PrismaBat chapter 10 . 10/10/2016
That was adorable! I'm so glad everything worked out. Well, we knew it would, but it didn't make it any less suspenseful. At least Fear finally got everything off his chest and now realizes there's nothing for him to worry about. And the way this ended with Joy asking Fear about the Rockhopper was a cute and perfect touch. I look forward to the epilogue if you decide on writing it. I wish I was able to to get a patron account to help donate but I wish you the best of luck on it.
Artsy.retriever16 chapter 10 . 10/10/2016
THIS IS SO CUTEEEEE I LOVE IT SO MUCHHH GOOD JOBBBB XD AHH FANGIRLIN RN
CNBW chapter 10 . 10/10/2016
OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH 33!
Honestly a fantastic story.. incredible job. This story is one of the reasons why I love StarNerve so much. Fear gets scared and embarrassed easily but yet Joy is so open and excepting! They're the perfect couple in my opinion.

Can't wait to read more of your stories. :)
HollyAnne1084 chapter 10 . 10/10/2016
Hey there! I've been reading this for quite a while now and I haven't had any time to review at all with school and stuff. I just wanted to say that this was a super awesome ending and I'm super glad that Joy understands! StarNerve is an awesome pairing, am I right? :D

Anyway, great job with this story and I'll look at the credits and I'll definitely read the epilogue! You are a talented writer and I can't wait for Always By My Side and Out of Place! I'm looking forward to those from you and I'm sure that they'll be great! Toodles for now! :)
Sydney chapter 10 . 10/10/2016
Sorry it accidentily cut me off :/ I was going to say I've read things have been tough for you lately, and I'm very sorry to hear that. If it makes you feel better, your stories and artwork inspire me and always make me feel happy. You are a truly talented writer and artist, and I hope that everything works in your favour. Thank you for writing your stories, especially this one, I can't wait for Always By My Side. You a truly talented, and things will eventually get better. I know how it feels to be in a rut, I've been in quite a few myself, and I deal with bad anxiety too. Anyways, thank you. Have a great day :) :)
Sydney chapter 10 . 10/10/2016
Oh my goodness! That was amazingly adorable! I loved this story so much! While it is ever so sad to see it end, all amazing things must come to an end. You are seriously amazing! You took a cliché and turned it into something enjoyable, fresh, new and completely original! That takes true talent! Each character has been in character throughout every chapter! And what an ending! That surpassed my expectations by a mile! It was adorable and so heartwarming! Very very relatable as well. I come home from school every Monday and read every updated chapter, and it has never let me down. Your stories always brighten my day and are sometimes the best part of my days! I was literally freaking out when I read this chapter. You provided tension in such a simple climax, but I was still completely invested with it! I have read that you have been going through some tough
Craig T. Crocodile chapter 10 . 10/10/2016
Oh my gosh, such a sweet ending! Joy and Fear's confessions to each other deeply moved me. Joy is such a sweetheart! 3

This was a great story! I wonder what will happen in the epilogue?
Sfirea chapter 10 . 10/10/2016
When Fear was at the game stand, I kept going like "I can't look!" but I had to since this was a story, and it only plays along as you read.
I'm glad the explanation came out, and how Joy mentioned seeing the good in Fear's not so great moments; taking them as a sign of his devotion.
It has been a sweet little read, and I wonder how this is going to close.
Artsy.retriever16 chapter 9 . 10/3/2016
GAH FEAR YOURE TOO ADORABLE I CANT HANDLE IT XD ANOTHER AMAZING CHAPTER AS ALWAYS! sorry I always talk in caps XD I CAMT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATEEEE
Razorback 234 chapter 9 . 10/3/2016
*Sniffle* That was just beautiful...love it! Hope the best that all goes well in the word of writing :)
Sydney chapter 1 . 10/3/2016
Come on Fear, you can do it! Oh my goodness what an emotional chapter! Your writing gets better and better every chapter. I felt every single thing Fear felt, not just because I know how he feels. Your writing put me in his exact situation and allowed me to feel everything. That is true talent. Congratulations on your Patreon! I can't donate because I'm a little too young, but I really hope that you get all the support you need. If I could donate I really would. Yay! Always By My Side will come out soon! And Out Of Place! Yay! I really hope Fear doesn't break up with Joy, they are too cute and I want them to stay together. This can really relate to me, because I've felt like I'm not good enough for some people, such as my friends. Anyways, I cannot wait for the next chapter! Good Luck :)
CNBW chapter 9 . 10/3/2016
COME ON FEAR YOU CAN DO ITTTTT! XD
God, I love this story. :D
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