Not bad... Not bad at all :-)

Close to the end? Not yet. Still have a fair bit before Sozin's Comet. Keep up the good work

This is Zuko. For these friends, he would face a million lightning bolts without blinking an eye

Hopefully the next scene will be up soon. I wonder if someone is going to get hurt this time

Ch.16 can we please get rid of this guilty Katara it’s not her fault that she doesn’t love aang. Zuko has no right to try and force her to be with Aang just because he thinks the Avatar deserves her.

great story!

That choice Zuko made there at the end, sacrificing his own happiness so the one he loves can be happy, is a choice I was forced to make recently as well. It's not easy for sure

this was a good chapter. but i think all the flash backs were a bit too much. don't let that stop you from writing though. keep up the great work. i am looking forward to the next update.

I really enjoyed this chapter only just now getting around to reading it. At first I was so excited for Katara sneaking out but then it was the result of Aang being captured willingly. I like the plot line of Zuko having feelings for Katara. Can’t wait for the next chapter! Thanks!

This chapter was great. I love how you were able to slip in the Ember Island Talk between the girls.

Not surprised that happened. Not the best idea to go to that party but an even worse idea for Aang to willingly give himself up.
Zuko needs to improve and fast. A confrontation is coming faster than he wants to admit

Great chapter!

Ah poop, they’re gonna run into Azula aren’t they..

Love the story so far.

Katana is gonna sneak to that party. Sounds just like what she would do