Please continue the story .
I loved every bit of it .
I loved Christian and Ana.
They are so lovely together.
I loved Elliot though he is ridiculous all the time but I understand why he is Christian's best friend.
I love Kate.
In most of these stories I have read writers write her just as she is written in FSOG.
But you made her more vibrant here.
I kind of hate her but I can't help falling in love with her.
Please continue the story.
I would like to know what is going to happen in their future. XOXOXO.

Finally, we begin to get a true picture of your Elana and she isn't the terrible witch so many other stories portray. I so hope you will come back and finish this story. It has great potential. Thanks for sharing!

Too much pain for C&A in my opinion...

Yes, but what happened in bed?

Great beginning!

update soon plz loved it want more

Y si la vio besándolo porque no fue y la saco de esa situación.

At last!

This is a good story. Please update soon

Please continue the story

Are you still chasing bunnies? Looking forward to your next update. Thanks!

Oh my goodness I read this story in a matter of days please i know u haven't written any more but I'm pleading please bring this story back to life its amazing

I really hope you update this soon. I would like to know what happens with Kate, Elena, Christan, el. I do think I figured out what is going on with carry. Update soon please. Don’t worry about the trolls out there either. You are a fine writer. Each person is there own and own style of writing.

Wow.
You are an horrible writer.

Hope you are ok and will be able to come back to us soon. I'm really missing your story.