Reviews for Yo-Kai Are Everywhere!
KRUSA1 chapter 5 . 12/29/2016
(to megaDMX)not at all what i meant but that is an awesome start!
(to you)well, what do you think?
Mega DMX chapter 1 . 12/28/2016
Hey, what's up dude. Krusa1 told me you need help on the loud house/yo-kai watch. Reply to me if you need help or not.
KRUSA1 chapter 1 . 12/17/2016
okay for the loud house/yo-kai watch crossover story i based the structure off that of another yo-kai watch crossover story "yo-kai watch: mystery of springdale" to a degree some chapters will have one yo-kai appear at a time others will have a group working together or several competing against each other but here's a little something that may help explain how i think the first meeting with jibanyan and komasan should go(the following scene is a preview like how critics are given access to movies before they hit theaters)
(something to help convince you that this story has promise and potential with a little cooperation and love between you and megadmx):
(the backstory for this scene: Rita and lynn Sr are fighting thanks to dismerelda and the loud kids, with help from Ronnie Anne and bobby are searching for strong yo-kai to help beat that depressing pile of goo, when they stumble across an intersection with an ice cream store next to it)
whisper:" WAIT!(van-zilla stopped almost instantly)i sense it! 2 powerful auras!"
Lynn:" really!? sweet! that means 2 yo-kai we can befriend right?"
whisper:" that is absolutely true whis,(BTB: "whis" was whisper's verbal tick from the original Japanese version and actually said once in the manga)one from the intersection and the other from the ice-cream shop"
R.A.:" ready lame-o?"
lincoln:" ready as I'll ever be"
as they get out of the van and ready their watches Ronnie Anne went into the shop and lincoln searched around the intersection:
inside the ice cream shop: Ronnie Anne search around and spotted something was eating bits of ice cream from customers: a small dog like creature with swirls all around his body and green bag
and his name is...
komason:" MONGE!(monge and zura were komasan and komajiro's verbal ticks from the original Japanese version)this taste so good zura!(he then hears a voice going psst, looked and saw Ronnie Anne telling him to come here, he was surprised to see a human see a yo-kai)OH MY SWIRLS!"
meanwhile at the intersection: lincoln and whisper were searching for the yo-kai at the intersection
whisper:" remember it can only be revealed when hit directly with the light whis,(the light soon makes contact with a shadow)THERE IT IS! THE VILE MONSTER!"
the shadow soon opens it eyes and lets out a fierce roar only to be revealed as a red cat with a notched ear, 2 lit tails, and a little bell(and super cute)
?:" okay! time to start another day of training!(in this story leni will be the that introduces jibanyan to chocobars and lincoln will be the one who named(or renames)him jibanyan)"
lincoln(clearly confused):" that's it? that's the vile monster that has been making near misses?"
whisper:" i am 100% sure of it! for he is...(cue dramatic pause while he searches the yo-kai wiki)... a nekomata: in ancient times this feline yo-kai originating from mountains or villages were cats that lived long or where horribly treated are known all around as horrible monsters that mastered fire magic, raised the dead, can grow to incredible heights, and ate humans(lincoln:" that's awful")this individual nekomata appears young, inexperienced, we can take him but be careful"
but as lincoln slowly stepped forward, a truck started making it's way to the intersection
?(jumping in front of the truck):" got you in my sights ya evil truck! it ends here and nyow! prepare to face my...PAWS OF FURY!(he tries to punch it only to be sent flying)EYE OF THE TIGER!
(after being flung around and hitting the ground)meow(whisper:" meow to you")(turns around and sees lincoln and whisper)meow(lincoln:" uh...meow to you?")(looks around a little bit before realizing...)NYA! YOU CAN SEE ME!?"
KRUSA1 chapter 5 . 12/14/2016
try to hold on i told someone about your problems and asked him to help out he answers to megadmx he mostly write fanfiction for TAWOG(which i did not give notice to before)but recently he has begun writing loud house fanfiction(so far 2 based on episodes of aqua teen hunger force)and considering how good you both are and and how much one guy watches one show i figured this could be a collaboration fic between you both and trust me it will work he is already on his way to fix up your problems, for more info start at "ding-a-ling"(a loud house parody of the ATHF episode "dickisode")it is super funny and after that go to his page and i believe you will like what you see, just give this a try and who knows maybe the story idea I've been telling you guys about will become a reality one day
KRUSA1 chapter 5 . 12/6/2016
okay that's super mega cool i don't judge and have already forgiven you and i may have suggested the story to another guy and i think you should watch and male such a crossover because it's practically the hottest show on nick right now it even has it's own TV tropes page that i think you should check out for the time saver thing so and there is no problem i don't do the PM thing either most of the time i'm a pretty chill guy and can wait for a long time so i already forgave you my friend
John McCarthy chapter 4 . 11/29/2016
Well in the game you meet Tattletell next a little old lady Yo-kai from the Mysterious Tribe who makes you tell all of your secrets.
John McCarthy chapter 5 . 11/23/2016
Well I hope you can get back to the story. This seems even better then the show and games.
KRUSA1 chapter 5 . 11/22/2016
nah it's super cool I'll wait for a bit and if you want to see what i was writing about the loud house has a wiki and i hope you would at least give it a chance who knows you may like it
KRUSA1 chapter 1 . 11/15/2016
Okay...I've been waiting for you for some time maybe you've been watching the loud for the research thing I told you about, seriously it is a great show filled with an amazing cast of characters has plenty of throwbacks to the comic strips of old and well...I can't help but think that it would go great with yo-Kai watch
KRUSA1 chapter 4 . 11/11/2016
okay the first guy didn't work out so maybe you will take this idea(that is hoping that you like the loud house it is a great show): the loud house: yo-kai watch:
an AU story that takes place after season 1 and intersects with season 2:while out on a outing to grand state park the mcbrides, santiagos, and louds all stumble across a mysterious gashapon machine and out of curiosity got a little ball, opened it and freed a spirit named whisper now in addition to serving those 3 families whisper gave Ronnie Anne and lincoln their own yo-kai watches but as they learn about the mysterious yo-kai and makes friends with them the dreaded kaima tribe watches from the background and plot a sinister plan that puts all people and yo-kai in danger now it is up to these young heroes to befriend the legendary yo-kai, battle the kaima tribe, and save both worlds from tyranny and annihilation... but beware when a yo-kai enters your life it will never be quite the same and now some story elements:
lincoln would be the wielder who will try to talk to the Yo-Kai(chapters centering on him and/or the rest of the loud kids taking cue from the anime)
Ronnie Anne would be the wielder who will try to fight the Yo-Kai(with chapters centering on her and/or bobby being inspired by the manga)
clyde would be the one inspirited most often though with leni and lori and bobby altogether coming at a close 2nd
jibanyan with be Lincoln's partner while Ronnie Anne's would be komasan
as for the butler role: as usual whisper would stick with lincoln but the one who would serve as Ronnie Anne's is komajiro
bobby, clyde, and the loud sisters were around the tree when Ronnie Anne and lincoln open the capsule and released whisper so they can see yo-kai as well(except when they get inspirited and only after lincoln or Ronnie Anne reveals said yo-kai with the watches)
clyde would eventually get the yo-kai watch u and get paired with tommynyan, USApyon, and the KK brothers
kyubi would try to pull the same stunt he did in the anime but Lincoln would suspicious of the new guy eventually exposing him as a yo-kai leading to the first major battle in the story
when venoct makes his first appearance some unusual things would have already occurred(like yo-kai inspirtments become more powerful or widespread)involving mysterious stones(which i call kaima charge stones) and mysterious sightings leading the cast(particularity whisper)to believe that venoct has lost control of the essence of the yamato no orichi he gained his power from and has turned evil(somewhat akin to the grovile in the 4th gen pokemon mystery dungeon games)
as well as a collection of chapter ideas to help you get started if you do choose to turn this idea into a story:(Ronnie and link will be working together in certain stand alone chapters or separately in multi-part mini-arcs(usually 2)that shares a certain yo-kai)
roughraff(lincoln/Ronnie Anne chapter): leni who is normally so sweet has all of a sudden turned bad, pent up feelings about jerky ex-boyfriends? a sudden influx of hormones? a super crummy day? and when clyde, bobby, luna, lana, and lily turned bad that got lincoln and Ronnie Anne thinking that there is a yo-kai at work: the bad boy of the tough tribe roughraff
illo(2-part arc)part 1: it's valentines day and Lincoln's(human)friends got amazing valentines while lincoln got a rather bland valentine even clyde got one from haiku that got him detecting a new yo-kai: master of illusion illo, part 2: Ronnie Anne(after hearing about Lincoln's encounter with illo)finds the old man yo-kai, will she succeed and get his medal or will she fall under his illusions?
timidevil(Ronnie Anne chapter): Ronnie Anne and bobby are at dairy land for a day of fun only to find themselves terrified of everything they soon realized that their day has been ruined by cowardly yo-kai timidevil but when Ronnie tries to cure him of his cowardice with roughraff she soon finds herself in her toughest battle yet: against the fierce beelzebold
espy(Lincoln chapter): Lincoln's school day has been messed with by lola who can suddenly read minds he soon finds himself against the psychic yo-kai espy
robokoma(RA chapter inspired by the robonyan chapter of the yo-kai watch manga): a mysterious robot has suddenly appeared in the Santiago house and challenges komasan to a fight
signibble(lincoln chapter):lincoln and clyde were getting ready to watch arrggh when the channel changes by itself every 20 seconds only to realize it is the work of signibble
komashura and blowkade(RA chapter): a komainu statue has been added to the royal woods museum and while checking it out Ronnie Anne and komasan meet up with 2 unexpected yo-kai: the impassable blowkade and komasan's pa: the legendary yo-kai of the mysterious tribe and one time protector of ankor Wat, komashura
Sandi(original story with lincoln): leni is sleeping longer then normal and the others are getting worried so using the combined powers of Baku and miropo, lincoln and lori travel to the recesses of leni's mind and encounter sleeping yo-kai Sandi can our heroes beat this sand born yo-kai and save leni? what will they learn about her along the way? including:
leni's favorite memories of lori
leni's fashion tips
and her strangest fantasies involving bobby and lori(all 13 kids and their new found yo-kai friends:" WHAT!?")
apelican(with clyde?!):the super Americanizing yo-kai apelican has inspirited lori turning her to an ultra patriot(to the point where she starts scaring/annoying everyone)as lincoln and Ronnie Anne tries to(and fails miserably at)beat the sharp shooter the moment arrives for the merican yo-kai and yo-kai watch u to make their dynamic debut and CLYDE'S moment to shine(seriously?! the little nerd?! really?!)
and a few more elements before i forget: hovernyan appears to lincoln and Ronnie Anne early on to hand them the yo-kai watch model zero which in addition to summoning the z-medal yo-kai also allows our heroes to use powered up "MOXIE!" versions of regular soultimate moves(sort of an at least once a chapter type deal)
and other then jibanyan, whisper, and hidabat, there should be 2 other yo-kai that will live with the louds: brushido and miropo(with brushido being the 2nd yo-kai befriended in yo-kai watch 2 it would make sense for him to appear early on and inspirit some one(most likely lola or least likely but ironically lana)to clean up Lana's side of the twin's room and miropo also joining early as part of a lesson on tsukumogami(provided by whisper)so he can get lincoln or anyone else get to where they need rapidly unless circumstances block those efforts)
with all of this i think this story would be rated somewhere between K to T
you said you need ideas i'm an idea man you get what you want to please do some research and consider this before accepting or turning down this idea I've already been rejected once and it would mean the world to me if you say yes but it's your choice
KRUSA1 chapter 4 . 11/7/2016
hi I've been reading your work and it is great: also i have a suggestion: recently I've been writing to this guy the loud author about a crossover between the loud house and yo-kai watch and i was hoping you would help out with that
RSBCS chapter 4 . 10/24/2016
This is a really cool story. I've just started getting into Yo-Kai Watch after seeing the anime some time ago. This is really cool with Nate and Katie both befriending and fighting Yo-kai to protect their hometown. That last chapter was especially funny with Nate getting beat at video games by Katie.

It stinks that this last chapter is an author's note, but I'm sure you have your reasons. Speaking of, maybe I can help.

If Kyubi is anything like his anime self (haven't watched too much of the game just yet), I'm wagering he's after the 100 hearts to get promoted. I'd actually find it funny for him to try and impress Katie, and then Nate comes along and gets a little defensive with her for reasons unknown to him.

As for other ideas, would you consider adding in Komasan at some point?

Keep up the good work.
Yokailover01 chapter 2 . 9/3/2016
Nice story you got! I encourage you to keep writing!
Story Review-Reviews Stories chapter 3 . 8/24/2016
This was a really good chapter. More along the lines of original than the game, which I like. Nate and Katie's semi-arguments about games and manga were funny. Keep up the good work.
muk854 chapter 3 . 8/23/2016
Kyubi is here yay, things will surely get interesting now. Also I like the scene you did with Nate and Katie, that we great. Can't wait to see the next chapter.
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