I really really love your Story thank you very much for sharing it with us:):)

I just wanna say that I rarely see my name in books so when I did I completely *froze* for a few seconds cause I was absolutely not expecting it

why are the italicized chapters sooo much better that the other?

Did you really just use the poem from when a good man goes to war!?
Why! Now I am crying thinking of my poor Amy and Rory and little River!

ever thought of using line breaks in this. This chapter is a bit of a mess without them. You had Erin kidnapped bit then it suddenly jumps back to the angels in the next paragraph very confusing with no line breaks that's what they're for

Also I feel like you wrote this bonding as exactly as the same bonding as the other one it's abit boring because I knew what would happen next. Also Erin has said she's different to Cassie but she reacts the exact same. And what's with Michael saying something like bond with me Erin answering then lucifer says the exact same thing and Erin says the exact same thing. it's Michael and Lucifer are the same person. it's crazy

why do you write Lucifers and michaels names in caps when Erin climaxes it's really annoying could you not just use a ! that's what they're for?

SKIP

This is so silly why have you just changed to 1st person when all the other chapters are in 3rd person. Sorry to say but it makes you look a tiny bit stupid because this is basic grammar. You only stay in one person while writing otherwise it will get confusing for your readers. literally all your chapters in this book are in 3rd person and this one is in 1st ? makes no sense hun

hun it's not no one pov that's just 3rd person you don't need to write that every chapter if its all 3rd person

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

It’s reincarnation. Incarnation means predecessor and Erin in this case is the reincarnation of Cassiel

Dixie is in Georgia. Just check your locations. Other than that it is so great so far. Carry on.

love it

how do you know if your oc is a mary sue? the love interest falls for them before the second fucking chapter. one thing no one explains is why they even need fighters or commanders, what are they fighting?