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Oh why don't you add Tracer from Overwatch

The ghost rider thing is kinda lame

I liked the chapter!1

I find this to be a very interesting story to read, so it would be a real shame to see it removed. If you have lost interest in adding new chapters to this story, can you at least leave it up for others to read? Please?

Please keep writing this story please

I've been giving this some thought, but I think I have good decent idea for arrow. You can have Sean learn the skill from the shiryryu(sorry if I spell it wrong) and the Lin kuei for the same amount of time that Oliver has been on the island "so to speak".in that time Sean learns to be more deadly then scorpion and Sub-Zero. The powers he has I'll leave that up to you cause I can't decide. Thea is the first know his true identity then Felicity, Sarah, and Laura. Sean struggles to let the three of them in his heart,but he eventually caved in. The rest is up to you to decide.

Not surprised Ahsoka was next

A bit OOC for Luminara since you didn’t give much indication that she and Sean had interacted much. I mean she was content to leave Bariss and Ahsoka buried in geonosis so it’s a very radical change for her so quickly

Nice chap, though I wonder when you’ll have a twilek give him a Lekku job

So is Freddy a good guy forced to do bad or is he an asshole? Find out next time on Dragon ba... whoops, wrong series

Nice chap, though you should have given some indication of time since Shaak to falling for him so quick is a bit meh

Did you mean Juhani or was that an OC that was killed?

Well since you named his mother Mara in this, I wouldn’t recommend using Mara Jade as a pairing

There are others from the knights of the old republic, mass effect, and others

More chapters please and thanks.
Lots of it.