This is really really good, and Mikan is really such an interesting character... she's so twisted but it's interesting to think about and read about. And I feel like you captured her twisted despair mindset really well? Something about the style of writing... it feels kinda jagged and weird but it's oh so fitting.
And Mikan's thoughts about Chiaki and the AI Chiaki is so interesting to read too. Sad and painful, yes, but even with how painful it was, it was a good read. Nanamiki is a really wonderful ship and I do wish we could know what Mikan thought about AI Chiaki. Thank you for writing this!

you do have a point about tsumiki and her despait disease. it just really feels refreshing and good to look at it at a whole new point. also this is quite very nice and keep it up.

Really good. That one part was a little graphic but it's mikan so I can understand it. Overall good.

I have a feeling Junko is responsible for the class rep Chiaki's disappearance. I wonder what Tsumiki would think of that?

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