Very Interesting story congrats
I'll be witing for next chapter

I have a teacher called Mr Crocker

Thank you for this fanfic

guys plz bare with the bad grammar as I am too busy with school to even take a look and correct my errors,it is really hectic life and school gave me no time to do anything at all. criticism is welcomed as long as it is within the acceptable range.

Dude. Your grammar is really bad. Fix it please.

very good chapter

ok

how about stevonnie struggles to do normal activities because some times both Steven and Connie have a disagreement about something. like if Connie hates something Steven loves they can't come to an agreement. also you could have them try to go to school and see the troubles that happen

It is beautiful. this chapter and the next is gonna be spectacular

Update

whoa the was a good bad news bomb. I like it

This seems like a great story! It was a little hard to read, I wasn't sure when witch people were talking, and the dialogue wasn't in quotation marks.

These are easy fixes, though! The story is pretty solid :)

thanks for the update

Umm...you could use more work on your grammar, spelling and capitilisations.

good story keep up the good work!