! I was already falling in love with this story, but then I read your dedication at the end and it plunged my heart into an even deeper level of appreciation. While I'm so sorry that you had to have so many experiences in the hospital with your son, I feel like your love for him shines through in the details of this fic - the depth of feeling, both difficult and incredible, is wonderfully captured in your writing. I can't wait to read more!

It’s starting to get real good, please so update the story. Zevon’s characterization is excellent.

So glad to have found this here as well! Once again, i love the premise and your writing in general..and Mamoru's colleague is such a mess.

Uh oh..he's going to follow them? He's gonna learn their secrets soon..lol..
I really like what you are doing here..I feel like I'm watching House or something but Sailor Moon style..With the mystery disease and all..It's connected to the youmas right? Looking forward to your next update. Thank you!

Looooove Ami's fierceness in dealing with Zevon...and their banter..and his playfulness..lol...Thank you so much!

I'm starting to see why this fic is called "Invisible Wounds." I'm curious what the enemy did to these patients and if it's connected to Zevon..for them all to fear the senshi..
...his protectiveness over Mamoru was like a memory reflex for him as his guard, huh?
Can't wait for more Zoicite/Ami scenes! Thank you!

Whoa..Zevon's nightmares are crazy..which is real and which isnt?
Aww, Ami made an impression on him that he can't forget her..But it seems like she triggered his nightmares. Yikes..I'm also horrified by Mamoru's flashbacks.. did he do that while he was brainwashed? Or did he truly believe in Beryl? That he would do that for her..?

Oooooh...intriguing! Was Ami brainwashed as Mercury or something that she did that to Zoicite? And he's sorta remembering that..

OMG!...whoa, Ami!...lol...this must be Ami's first one-night stand...i hope she's stronger than she looks in handling Zevon's playboy ways or the consequences of it, at least..

I wonder if Zevon's dreams are about his past at the Golden Kingdom with Mamoru and their friends, the generals... i'm curious too about Zevon's reasons for turning down the promotion.
As for Ami, she can't seem to catch a break. Hopefully next chapter things will get better for her. Thank you!

Aww, Zevon is close to his mom. I hope she likes Ami later on... love Ami's friends; they're the best... and yay! to Zevon hanging out with male friends rather than a girl for the night. lol.

Oooooooh...so Zoicite/Zevon is a player here and Ami puts school and senshi business first in her life and love 2nd...I wonder how these two will fall for each other... thank you!

hiw long until more?

I am so excited to read this! Please take this as a place holder until I finish my list of fics I am supposed to read and review first. I should be coming back to this asap (although I might read it on AO3, if you don't mind?)

I can't wait! It's been a long time since I've read some good AxZ!

I SQUEALED ALL THE WAY THRPUGH THIS CHAPTER! First Minako the chauffeur all "But IT'S MAMORU" over and over (and I need to repeat it loudly: I FUCKING ADORE THE DYNAMIC YOU GIVE THOSE TWO OMFG) and her worry being late and OMG THAT MOMENT WHEN THE PENNY DROPPED. I love the way you built this up, having Zevon there with Mamoru (and Minako later too LOL) explaining the new intern will be Mizuno-sensei's daughter and only THEN showing her face! And I was delighted in how smitten and determined you had Zevon be about Ami, while Ami remained professional and stoic! And that hospital tour! It was so smooth, so flirty, so amazing! obviously the reason why it went extra smoithly you told us in the ANs makes me rather sad, but you are the best at silver linings as always! And Zevon asking her out for dinner after it without missing a beat feels so playful and in character and I giggled st my screen! I loved it! ! !