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   nataliekabra33 chapter 1 . 6/28 YES PLEASE MORE CHAPTERS! ok I absolutely LOVED this, I need to know what happens! are they soulmates? did Tom find an inch of humanity and use it to save her? is the story going to be like the Little Mermaid, only evil-er? WHO KNOWS |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/25 omfg i don’t think i would live if this wasn’t a two shot PLEASE LOVELY GODDESS DONT LET ME DIE |
| MissPanic chapter 1 . 5/9 hi, you’ve probably forgotten this story or something (or maybe you don’t like it anymore?) but i just really wanted you to know that i absolutely love it (and all your other works too) and honestly i was just wondering if you were ever going to update or if this will stay as a one chapter thing forever, like i said, i loved it and from time to time i revisit and read it again |
| OnlyRiddle'sGirl chapter 1 . 4/19 Sequel sequel Pleaseeee? |
| crocgirl9219 chapter 1 . 4/10 HECK YEAH IM INTERESTED IN ANOTHER CHAPTER or a sequel or whatever it is you have in mind BUT GIVE ME MORE! |
| Elizabeth chapter 1 . 3/4 Ok more! Can we get Tom’s POV from chapter one? Will Tom follow Hermione back out to sea? How is Hermione a pirate? Was she dragged into like Elizabeth Swan? |
| EmiliaKyuchi chapter 1 . 11/11/2019 Fantastic work on this. Thanks for sharing! |
| AudiArcher chapter 1 . 8/12/2019 MOAR. |
| Timberli chapter 1 . 7/12/2019 More please! |
| BookParadise chapter 1 . 7/5/2019 I just discovered your works, and that are sooooo good, your writing has a way to captivate the reader and leave us wanting more. Thanks for sharing your stories with us. |
| W. A. Cypher chapter 1 . 5/5/2019 Your plotline is great, as is mentioned a thousand times by others already. This one and Playing Cupid are by far my favourites. Your Hermione is really funny and your Tom is definitely alluring, I love them. There's a few typo like "he" when it's supposed to be "she" or "her", nothing else though so you don't have to panic about them. Lastly, I don't feel like this is the end, so i suppose three's another chapter? It's been 3 years already but I still hope you would continue this two-shot as this one is too nice to be left like this. |
| kakang chapter 1 . 4/26/2019 hi i love u incase that wasn’t established like completely,, ardently,, truly its fucking hurting me pls also not to sound demanding but can i ask for a spare update? pls? i fucking love this so much im about to cry eating dinner like this is too good how dare u write something this good! also... mermaid tom can like...get it |
| Lolita chapter 1 . 4/22/2019 Umm okay not to be annoying or anything...but could you please just post that one last chapter of the story? You said it was a two-shot, right? Just one...more...chapter?! I sound like a drug addict, but come on, I'm desperate here! Love ya'. :D |
| Lolita chapter 1 . 4/21/2019 AAAAH, I miss this story so much! Your Tom is always *perfect*. The sex scene between these two as you've written them would be freaking amazing! |
| Forever Loving You chapter 1 . 4/2/2019 I would give ANYTHING for an update! I’d give anything for at least five more chapters, two just simply isn’t enough! |
