Um, sorry but I can’t find it, could you send a link to it, please?

Alright! Can't wait how is the relationship of Gray and Noelle gonna grow, and I wonder if she's gonna forgive Lyon for betraying.

I love it! Continue with this story. I want more of Gray and Noelle

Wow, Noelle has some story with Jellal. Wonder what could be. Continue updating please

Wow. Another man for Juvia, this is better! That is what I'm thinking, Gray deserves someone better than Juvia. Could you please update soon? I would be happy to read the next ones

Ive been a really big fan of your story for a while now, I hope you get motivated and start writing again

So far mostly a retelling of the first two chapters of the manga. That's not a bad thing, just interested to see what direction you take this in.

I know i haven’t read far yet, but I can’t help but wonder, is Noelle ever going to get to eat a stawberry in this story?

La suite

Please update i love this story

I read the original Ice Slayer once upon a time, but am glad to have some new things to come back to. Much improved, although some quick spellchecking wouldn't go amiss.

I'm actually rather curious as to Gray's reaction when he found out that Noelle had stayed behind to help Erza; I can actually imagine the others trying to hold him back. Perhaps in a flashback or something. But that's only a suggestion.

Keep up the good work :)

Is Noelle's brother also a dragon slayer?since all dragons are extinct at the present time & dragon slayers & their dragons time traveled from the past 100 years ago to the present time that's why they,the very few dragon slayers ,I just got too excited reading your story!It's a good one to read

Oh wow, this is brilliant! I adore Noelle's character and how she traveled with Mystogan and Wendy when she was younger! I wonder how Wendy and Noelle got separated... I am actually thrilled to meet some of these characters that you have foreshadowed, and I adore Burnet and Juvia's relationship! Noelle and Gray is adorable as well. :D I'm excited to see Gajeel and Noelle's relationship and see how that progresses. :)

I'm so happy to see this story moving again! It's okay to have an off chapter, and to be honest, it was still great to read! One of the best parts of this story is that the sole focus isn't the OC- other characters still share the page (even I've made that mistake). You wrote an episode without Noelle that still felt like it was a new chapter of the manga!

I'm glad to see you're back on your feet, and yeah, I have to agree Mashima lost focus and the heart of the story. Still, it seems like you know where it is! Until next time!

You're looking at moe? Oh, you're making me blush! Stop it! *covers face in embarrassment* XD Though I do cherish our friendship, BCFF!

It was an amazing chapter as always. I was not disappointed though I knew I would love it from the very beginning XD

It was intense and has be wondering what Loke did exactly. But knowing Loke it isn't hard to guess.

And I still love Cyneric! I want to read more about him hitting people with gloves like we talked about before XD I find that so funny. And I'm pretty sure Lucy and Juvia are fine...at least I hope so.

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! :D