This is good and I can’t wait for you to update it.

Don't you hate it when a good fanfic is ruined by two-dimensional tertiary characters taking on a primary role...?

I am writing this review in regards to the reflection of your morals in Harry's and Hermione's confrontation. Perhaps you will be open to my perspective.

In Harry's and Hermione's confrontation, Harry was right, but he was also wrong.
First, he was purposely avoiding her, so he lied here. Secondly, Harry was still a bad friend, despite also being right. 'Absolutely right' would have been being considerate as soon as Hermione had confronted him in the common room. Harry noticed her concern towards him there, but did not try to alleviate it. 'Absolutely right' would have been him having told her the very next day what he shouted at here, only doing so calmly and explaining he would need the space. At this point, it would have been Hermione's responsibility as a friend to respect this.
To surmise, as soon as he noticed his friend's-and this he very well knows-justified concern, he had the responsibility as a friend to speak to her.
Many critique through their fanfiction the non-disclosure of information towards Harry in canon, as do you, hence Hermaeus Mora, but they forget, that like in your chapter here, their characterizations of Harry sometimes become Dumbledore.

Pretty sure Frank Bryce was not 26 in the 90s
Might want to check that out

good story, one of my top 10 I'd say, looking forward to the rewritten version and new chapters

Fantastic story, I eagerly await the continuation.

I have to say, this is in the top 5 best stories I have read in my embarrassingly active ff reading 'career'! I loved the story and am looking forward to its continuation/rewrite. Do you have any idea regarding a timeline for that?

T_T

if there is problem on your story. it's disjointed. It's hard to connect some scenes.

the twists in this story is always good.

nice. super nice. extremely nice. you don't wait years to end your enemy if you can just do so now.

Alright story

Its really good I have enjoyed reading it so far. Keep up the good work looking forward to more.

I appreciate all the work you're willing to put in to have a consistent story. I look forward to reading a cleaned up story!

Can't wait love the story already.

Please post a changelog of what you've fixed when you're done. It's daunting to have to reread 100k words and play spot the difference.