Reviews for Metaxis
VannahSkye chapter 6 . 7/20/2019
This is so interesting, i love it! I can’t wait to learn more about what the heck is going on with Tom and Harry and how they ended up where they are. Their such creepy little buggers but I love it. Their eyes were also an interesting detail that I’m curious about... I’m guessing it has something to do with souls and horcruxes, something along those lines.

I have a question though. I don’t really understand why they’re in the detention facility in the first place? Hmm maybe I missed it but are they implicated in the other kids families murders too? I was thinking it was just the one kid that killed their own family.
Mor chapter 7 . 3/24/2019
I watched the documentary about the triplets in Psychology, it is morally wrong now but bac then the morals were very blurred.
Mor chapter 6 . 3/24/2019
I went to -if I remember correctly- a County Jail for my Youth Police Academy as a trip, the jail was a freakin maze. There were separate sections for the inmates time, a huge open area for the lower than 12 months to about 2-3 years, to the way smaller 5 to 10-15 years that where held between transfer (if I recall correctly) , and the almost as huge solitary confinement -it looked like a bunch of doors and had this small tv in this painted square perimeter. The area where the inmates met the outside world was tiny, like 2 and a half lockers wide and 15 across for both sections, and there was the phones that you could talk through and if any legal stuff needed to be dealt with it happened in a even smaller room. It’s been about three years since I went there so I’m slightly off most likely but this is the best I could remember in crack-ass-before-even-dawn.
acetwolf94 chapter 10 . 11/4/2018
I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
Sarahburch chapter 10 . 7/16/2018
Plz update
Addictedttf chapter 9 . 11/16/2017
My mind is just screaming Murder family. I see Will being the "mother" that just sighs when he sees his family trudge in after killing someone and demands to have another dog.
hellkiss chapter 10 . 11/11/2017
Intriguing
Waiting for more
R. A Cross chapter 10 . 11/11/2017
Oh Neville...
By the way, what will you do about the journal?
Power Of Universe chapter 10 . 11/10/2017
Velius! Hi! You update! Oh my!

*Ignoring my history works that needed to be done in favour of reading Metaxis*

Thanks for the update! This story is getting better and better every time I read it. Poor Will is indeed poor. I mean, he just can't catch a break, can he? I pity him. You know, sometimes, when I read Will's POV in Metaxis, I was reminded of your own POV. Prickly? But still funny nonetheless. XD

And I Lol'ed at Hannibal listening to Harry went on about the unicorns. That seemed funny.

Brian and Beverly?! Breverly? Brianly? Zatz? Keller?

Oh, *just read your notes below*...what idea? XD

Good luck with your stuDYING as always - I got my final Exams this late December or early January, I think. Eh, but I still can't resist writing GI and reading your stories though.
Power Of Universe chapter 9 . 10/27/2017
Her, V! So, I'm back to reading Metaxis again. Good job writing the chapter.

I like the end - Hadrian is scary. It's troubling me that /that/ only makes me adore him more... Well, Hannibal Universe is indeed dark - so that wasn't a surprise. Still, I expected the Death symbol appeared in you story - and here it is.

Poor Chris...but truthfully, I don't give a Shatner except the main characters. I pitied him - but that's all. Kinda callous, no?

I wonder if Hannibal likes playing this game with Hadrian and Marvolo...

Since it's a parallel world, would 'them' being someone in WW? Not magical, of course, but the counterpart of them? Like Severus? Or Moody? Dumbledore? Or, Merlin forbid, Lockhart? I don't think the last one had the brain though - but that would be funny.

Thanks for the chapter, V, hope to hear from you again. Whenever.
Power Of Universe chapter 8 . 10/27/2017
Woooo! Nice, nice, nice. Very nice. (I sounded like Jack for repeating that 'very nice' praise to Hannibal, am I?)

The plot twist! Very well done. And is it weird that I laughed when I read Price said Buddhism? 'cos Budish and Buddhism sounds alike. Well, not alike, alike, but yeah...ok I shut my mouth now.

That bit about Miriam Lass is unexpected. But this is getting more and more interesting.

Thank you for the update. \(v)/

...I need to take my time again to digest how wonderfully written this is. You should make your own book, V. I'm serious.
Power Of Universe chapter 7 . 10/27/2017
V...! Velius, you, you, you ingenious custard you...! I can't put it into words - 'coz you know, I'm bad at that. But all I can write is that - this chapter is fudging well-written and beautiful beyond words. I can't, for the life of me, to spun pretty little praises - but if I do can, I think it come with long pages of flowery words that seemed to be never ending. This is really good! I think I need to stop reading between chapters to appreciate your awesomeness.

I love Will - him and his morbidity. Hannibal displeased at being told outright. Abigail's personality. Tommy and Harry being little Shatner they are - they're all wonderful!

Thank you for the chapter!
city bookworm chapter 9 . 10/21/2017
Are you sure there is no supernatural aspect to this story? The boys were not old enough to have dealt with the Durseys eight years ago. I admit that you have me guessing where the plot is going. I almost feel sorry for Will this is confusing him. Is there going to be a chapter from Hannibal's POV?
city bookworm chapter 8 . 6/9/2017
How did Chris get out of kiddie jail to be killed? Where is the lost boys 'mother' ? The FBI is busy chasing the Angel Maker for Will bring Abigail to see her brothers. I wouldn't be surprised if Hannibal had something to do with the last Angel Maker murder. Since they found Miriam's hair. I'll agree Will is being blind, he hasn't put the pieces together. He is wary of Hannibal, Abigail and her brothers, but doesn't want to really see them. Things would be so much easier for him if he would. Better for the others as well. I look forward to reading more.
city bookworm chapter 7 . 5/24/2017
Is it weird to like Harry and Tom messing with Hannibal. So few can and live. They seem to be more like him, I can picture a young Hannibal playing with Chris too. Doing so makes him look like a victim, that was smart of him people will help a victim. With the trail coming up every bit could help them. They are in as much if not more trouble than Abigail is. She has both Will and Hannibal helping her. I can't help but think that something is about to happen soon. At least Jack is busy with the new killer to be going after Abigail or the boys. Where is Alana she is the one that has a background in child and family psychiatry Hannibal treats adults. For that matter where are the magical people if there are any in this story. As always I can't wait till the next chap.
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