First off, this deserves WAY more favs and reviews. This is well-written and thoughtful enough to be a book. The worldbuilding is amazing and the way you write characters is intriguing. Nobody is OOC and seeing AAI/AAI2 characters included is a nice bonus. I loved the first story in this series and I'm happy to hear you're writing another! Amazing story. I'm sorry I didn't review until the very end; I've been following it for a long time u

Clay...

Surprised nobody's said anything about Athena scent-wise. Is there nothing special about it, like there is Apollo? Hmmm. She clearly has an ability, even if it's one-off. And so far, it's seemed like abilities are scent-noticeable?

Blackquill is an interesting one. I can see him going over Edgeworth's head to try and get at the answers he wants. That may work out, just not in the way he might want.

Trying to remember who "Firefly" is...

Interesting about Pot, because he was the one who openly challenged Apollo. Certainly the most obvious choice. Rex Tainer could be a diversion or another possibility, seeing as she seemed a bit... eager... about getting rid of Apollo and crew. Colyte is another possibility too. But Destin and/or Tainer seem at this stage the most likely suspects.

And Sebastian figured it out by himself. He has come a long way out of Blaise's shadow. Where and how he'll fit in is going to be interesting. Someone pointed out the pack-in-a-pack idea, and I suppose it's in the realm of possibility. Especially as Sebastian will certainly involve Kay somehow.

Blaise, Kristoph and Dahlia... things could become even more "interesting" if those three work together at all. The possibility of one or more of them working with the shooter and their friends... seems possibly more of one now. Especially since Maya is involved.

So who's going to throw a spanner into the works next?

Licking Clay there, were we Herr Piano?

So we hear once more from Lang. Too bad about the circumstances, though. But yet another one alerted about the situation. Yet another stick in the fire. It's going to be hot, and someone (or someones) will get burnt.

Probably the only Alpha other than Apollo (or Lang) Edgeworth is likely to be talking to any time soon would be Juniper. Considering the hostile reception from certain quarters in the previous story, caution regarding informing the others about what's gone on would be prudent.

Sebastian... is not stupid, and he's probably going to guess (if he hasn't already started to) that something is going to happen to *him*, even if he doesn't possess Edgeworth's logical abilities. Whether he's aware that it's already begun is another matter, of course.

Keeping everyone else calm is going to be a challenge.

Sebastian is the beste person to look after Klavier it seems. I'm really enjoying the story it's really cool. Also loving the addition of Clay and Lang in this story.

This was an intense opening chapter. I wonder who shot Klavier?

So, Sebastian finds out the truth and Klavier is safe (for now...). But Sebastian has begun his change already... Is anyone going to tell him that he's going to become a werewolf? Or are they just going to leave it as a huge suprise?
And we're going to get a...visit from Blaise DeBeste soon... I feel sorry for Sebastian already.
More please! :)

Interesting implications with Kristoph there, both in how he died and what happened to him after he died. Quite leaving aside what he was trying to do there, too. Clearly Clay does need to be careful. Kristoph was clearly telling the truth about there being worse things - especially since he was trying to enact one of those on Klavier.

So, who's going to be the one to tell Sebastian? I doubt Klavier will be, for quite a while. Apollo would be... interesting, but Ema is currently closer, as are Gumshoe and Edgeworth.

I also wonder about a certain other pack...

Oh, Sebastian... If only you knew what that bite was going to do to you... But Sebastian DeBeste is the... Beste person to look after Klavier in this situation. ;)
Meanwhile, Clay vs Kristoph will be a fun match to watch... I really want Clay and Mia to show Kristoph what he truly is (if that's even possible?) But Kristoph, story hurting Klavier. :(
Oh, and Sebastian would have to put up with his dad... Well, I guess I should prepare for the angst?
More please! :D

WHY DID I NOT SEE THIS SOONER!?
Seriously, I've been looking at your Profile page on and off since the first story ended, and the one week I wasn't able to check...
Anyways, I digress.
I love this, but so many thoughts:
Firstly, who shot Klavier? Because whoever it was has made a huge error... And they're gonna get what they deserved. Either it was a Werewolf hunter, or maybe another pack leader who wants to destroy Apollo's pack?
Secondly, Kristoph needs to just die (yes, he's dead, but I just want rid of that smug evil pounce). Can Mia tell him that he's worthless trash, like she told Dahalia back in Trials and Tribulations?
Thirdly, I guess Sebastian is gonna be turned into a werewolf veeeery soon. Maybe in similar circumstances to Klavier back in the first story? I wonder if Kay will become a werewolf.
Fourthly, I wonder what part spirit channeling will play. Maybe Maya channels Kristoph for information? Unlikely though?
Anyways- MORE PLEASE! :D

Nothing is *ever* normal for any of you, Apollo, Athena... so I'm not particularly sure things are necessarily what they seem there, or that things are as fine as you want them to be. Athena crazed or otherwise affected by her (botched?) transformation (for whatever reason) seems... possible.

Other curiosities concerning things not mentioned (at least yet) in this story... like Franziska and Lang. They worked together, just how close or not do you intend for them to be. Hm. When was the last time Edgeworth saw her anyway?

And Edgeworth is Alpha, wolf or not. That much is plain. Dunno if you're trying to hint at something else or not with how the other prosecutors (wolf or not) react to Edgeworth, but worth keeping an eye on. And Edgeworth is NOT someone you want to make your enemy. A man of influence and power, with similarly powerful friends or allies, and highly respected and much loved. A poor choice of enemy indeed.

Kristoph, taking advantage of the situation as usual it seems. Dunno what could be done about that one, though? Maybe Clay in some way?

Klavier and Sebastian... that could be interesting, especially taking certain... views of certain defence lawyers into consideration. Could get ugly there. Probably will. How that'll be resolved will be interesting, as well as if they avoid causing too much hurt in the resultant fallout.

Sebastian's lack of knowledge of the situation is unsurprising. What Edgeworth does and says - and how he'll react to that - very much interested to see how that goes down. As well as what happens to Gavin next...

And then the other Alphas. Some of whom are going to be, at the least, suspiciously not sorry about what's been happening I wager.

Let's see where this goes next.

YES

I have been waiting for this fic. Thank you!

Excellent

A few names from the previous story raise their (ugly) heads as possibilities for wanting certain individuals dead. But we shall see I guess. I daresay some of them might get involved anyway even if they weren't to begin with.

And silver bullets? Well, hospitals aren't going to (and really shouldn't?) know about certain... issues... regarding silver, but what impact that will have is up to you of course.

And then Debeste... oh dear. Considering Kay, possibly double oh dear at least. Another Apollo situation, I guess? But will there be another Klavier?

Wonder if you intend to kill any of the main cast. Would be interesting to see. Or, for that matter, if werewolves (and ghosts) are the only things out there at night.

I assume, though, that (until this chapter anyway) no others than those established in the previous story have been identified as werewolves/other supernatural phenomenon (and regarding "Supernatural" - it is a more appropriate category for these stories than "Drama", and could be considered to enclose such anyway).