Reviews for Inverted |
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Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2018 With that summary you had my interest and with this chapter you now have my attention |
SonicReader1 chapter 7 . 4/2/2017 Wait where's Raven? |
TheNiemand chapter 4 . 2/23/2017 Ehm until Salem changed gender, it should be headmistress and not headmaster. |
The PhantomHokage chapter 7 . 12/27/2016 Interesting story I really like it and can't wait to see more |
Minesniper chapter 7 . 12/18/2016 "Hey sis!" "Jaune! You're alive! What are you doing here?" "Have you ever seen that scene in Star Wars where Anakin slaughters all the younglings?" |
fernando.palacios.3760 chapter 7 . 12/11/2016 Please upload soon |
julini chapter 7 . 12/10/2016 Great chapter |
HikariNiwa chapter 7 . 12/10/2016 Thanks for the chapter. |
desdelor97 chapter 7 . 12/9/2016 This was a great chapter. Please keep the great work. |
Ashbringer36 chapter 7 . 12/9/2016 Good to know you're not dead lol. Good chapter mate |
Socail chapter 6 . 10/6/2016 Aww was kinda hoping Pyrrah would of been a consort to jaune |
julini chapter 6 . 10/4/2016 Great chapter |
desdelor97 chapter 6 . 10/4/2016 This was a great chapter. Please keep up the great work. |
Yome A. Natyu chapter 5 . 9/22/2016 Will there be another food fight? I wanna see Adam and Cinder's reaction to it. Also, I should let you know that I'm lowkey shipping Jaune and Cinder. From what I've seen, Cinder is all innocent and not much of a femme fatale, so I kinda imagined Jaune meeting her and she gets a small, totally not a big deal crush on him. I also lowkey ship Jaune and Salem. Ships be sailin' yo! Anyways, I see professor X joined Jaune's army, and with working legs too, just hope Magneto isn't there to bust sh!t up. And looks like Jaune's about to make an entrance. I imagine Back in Black being played in the background as he presents himself. |
Nh1xxs chapter 5 . 9/20/2016 Kinda shorter than usual but keep it up found a typo btw "Ruby at his left side and Penny at his left" i think you mean right unless you wanted something longer than Ruby and Penny where at his left side |