Reviews for Vitae |
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sun1995 chapter 20 . 8/29 good Story. weil done:) |
TaeShears chapter 1 . 8/27 i laughed so much reading this seems so much like the real show and everyone go binge-watch Lucifer season t just came out |
Lucie chapter 20 . 7/1 awwww this was so adorable and spot on with the characters personalities and everything I felt like I was watching an episode of Lucifer! I hope chloe and Lucifer do have a baby and get married in the last season |
LONE RANGER 97 chapter 20 . 5/17 And they all lived happily ever after... Please let there be a sequel |
justjoe chapter 20 . 5/15 Thank you for giving us a well written, complete story. However, the plot was mostly OK for me. IMO there was just too much Lucifer and Chloe together. The show is at is best when everyone is given time to shine and to interact with each other. Lucifer was the primary comic relief in this story. On the show, Maze and even Linda often contribute very funny moments. Overall a really well-done story, just not one of my favorites. |
LONE RANGER 97 chapter 3 . 5/14 I love this chapter especially the part where Lucifer said he seen alien and thinks the baby will come out the same way |
LONE RANGER 97 chapter 1 . 5/13 Has run into an error, attempting to reset... Reset has failed... fuck |
Marryate chapter 20 . 2/10 My favourite story and I've now read a lot of them! Really enjoyed the humour and I thought the characters were really well protrayed and in character with the show. |
Natters chapter 20 . 2/7 Great fic. Loved it |
Guest chapter 20 . 12/13/2019 Is the fanfiction finished? But! I wanted to know about what Dan and Trixie's reactions were! Okayyy its fine |
OrangePlasticGummyBear chapter 20 . 11/13/2019 OMG. I just sat and read this whole story, start to finish, completely unable to stop! This was so sweet and SOOOOOOOO hilarious! After countless times of me laughing so suddenly and loudly that it scared them, both my cats decided it wasn't worth sitting on my lap while I was reading. Lol. Your depiction of Lucifer and Chloe's relationship and Lucifer's reaction to pregnancy, a baby, and fatherhood are absolute perfection! This is quite possibly my #1 favorite Lucifer fic! Thank you for your time spent writing and posting this for reader enjoyment! |
fightboredom chapter 6 . 10/8/2019 Great story so far. One thing, you keep using "weary" when you mean "wary". People mix those up in fanfiction all the time. |
K chapter 2 . 9/7/2019 That was beautiful |
NurdyGrl64 chapter 20 . 8/18/2019 I was a little disappointed in the lack if Trixie, but the rest was cute. |
Ava chapter 20 . 8/3/2019 Its a cute story. The writing is amazing! |