Why yo leave this

Why you leave this :(

and then Joel dies from a heartattack at the shock of what he is seeing the END!
Kidding I do hope you're still alive and coming back to this story. An really interessting premise that I hope to see it all the way to the end.

I really hope you update this story! Can't wait to see the other Chapters!

Fucking awesome! Please, keep chapters coming!

Keep up the good work. I love it

I literally teared up when I reached the bottom and realized there were no more chapters. I hate reading on my phone because the mobile version doesn't tell you if it's completed or not. I really hope this is still on going because of not I'm gonna cry for real. This was so amazing and clever that I just want more and more.

Loved this a bunch! Hope we'll get to see Ellie when Joel goes to the past

Amazing story so far! Hope you update it soon.

So good... can't wait for the next chapter

Great start mate cant wait till the next update

The emotion of this chapter shone through. A little chilling, when you described the thing with David. That was intentional, I'm guessing. I just love what you did with the end, just that one sentance as a sort of WHAM line. Perhaps missed by people that aren't really taking it in, but for those that do, it has the maximum inpact. I'm hooked, and look forward to updates.

Oh man, this is exciting! I feel like a great adventure is about to begin and I'm so ready for it! There's no calling from me where the story is goimg, because I have no damn clue where it could be going. YI just hope it wony't end with him waking back up with Ellie in his arms, meaning that everything was a dream. But we'll see. Have a fun time writing this one, pal. I will definetely enjoy reading it.