I loved the story!

Please write more!

its really nice! I love your story 33

Pleeeeeeaaaaase continue this its AMAZING!

Shouldn't it be 'McGonagall' instead of 'Magonagall'? And it should also be 'Patil', not 'Pavil'.

But he joins in sixth year...?

I've been reading all night. In hopes that they would find a way to be together, then it's done with Draco accepting to join the Death Eaters? Don't do this to me. Please tell me they're going to find a way. Great story btw.

I really like where this story is going so far, keep it up!

This is a very interesting start and I liked it! I saw that you got a negative review - give it no heed; even the most tired cliche can be made into an amazing story :)

Pfft... Tried by many people. Come up with something original!