Wonderfully woven my dear! Beautifully scripted!

Brilliant, meddling sisters. ;-). I think Gretchen split them up on purpose. Bravo!

Bravo! I’m glad Chakotay figured out where she ran, and let her fall apart in his arms. I hope their friendship blossoms in Indiana without the command structure hindering it. Well done!

This is superb! The twists of melancholy, happiness, loneliness, emptiness, and angst are wonderfully webbed together in this chapter. I hope Chakotay helps Kathryn and I’m sure Chapa will help too.

Wow, great start! Confusion and angst. Bravo!

*sigh* this is a perfect ending. Love it all.

Amazing story! I really enjoyed it!

This is a wonderful story! Once I started reading it, I couldn't stop til I finished it!

Very tender story

This was such a delightful story! Very heartwarming! So glad you posted it. Thank you!

This was such an enjoyable read. I loved all of the characters you included, especially little Chapa, and how Kathryn's and Chakotay's families had become so intertwined. I'll be coming back to this story when I need a feel-good read. Thanks so much!

Great story

A charming story and very much in character for both of them. Nicely done.
Thanks for sharing.

Great first two chapters. Can't wait for more.

Wonderful story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.