Reviews for The Spider God of Apokolips
Keane Skinner chapter 26 . 6/11
Great chapter loved it please make more
DeimosVulcan12 chapter 26 . 5/16
Awesome chapter sir. I'm happy that Diana is back on Earth with her loved ones. But all good things come to an end. :(. I wonder who you are going to have Clark introduce Diana to. Am I safe in guessing it is elither Kara or Connor?

Couple questions:
While both Diana and Peter don't want this marriage, is she at least going to allow him to have fun with his Furies? Guy has needs.
Will Peter and the others escape Apokolips when Grayven makes his move or will he stay and battle him with the others?
What powers will Peter develop to enable him to become a true son of Darkseid? Will he also manipulate the Omega Effect or will it be something else?
Will there be any heroines or villaness' that will join Peter's harem?
What is the outfit that Carol is wearing? Is it her leather Ms. Marvel suit?
Will Metron target Peter again at another point in the story or will he not appear again in the story?
Will Peter create his own Infinity Gauntlet?

Great update sir. Carry on
Arios chapter 26 . 5/13
Que Kara se una al Harem de Peter para horror y ponerle más sal a la herida del Kriptoniano
Guest chapter 26 . 5/4
Actualiza mas seguido, por favor
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 26 . 5/3
Such a rude cliff shows up again, damned cliff is always lurking. Thanks, well and safe we must stay, yhress.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 25 . 5/3
I'd like that cocky shit stain lantern jerk to die, one of the most annoying characters. Thanks, well and safe staying you must.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 24 . 5/3
Well at least Diana knows her husband can't ignore his aroused beautiful goddess wife. He absolutely wants her, unlike some insensitive derilict husbands that neglect their marital duties. More good read thanks, stay well and safe.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 23 . 5/3
It's obvious Diana's shallow thinking, motives and actions are harmful to her husband. Since she's a danger to herself, the furies and any other of Peter's assets I'm not following why the princess hasn't received proper education with training to live in reality, while her foolishness signifies fantasy land is her current residence. Good story times again thanks, be well and safe.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 22 . 5/3
I suppose Peter's women being strong-willed warrior goddesses, they are capable of holding onto all the needs that grow within them for their god until he gets past this annoying time of forced separation due to politics. Good chapters all, thanks. Be well and safe. Viruses are the devil.
Guest chapter 21 . 5/3
This is some super slow Diana development. I guess it has to be Peter that slaughters Orion and Bekka's grandfather so he can reclaim his woman. So Psylocke aquires a stone for Peter. These chapters are all good, maybe soon one annoying character will die or bothersome characteristics of somebody will get sorted out. Thanks, be well and safe, keep fruit bats away from farmers livestock.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 20 . 5/1
Now that Diana has identified the monstrous being destroying earth inhabitants she needs to get the hood and information to Vision for Peter's help. Thanks, stay well and safe.
Zayden StormVoid chapter 26 . 5/1
Sorry that I haven’t reviewed in a while, lots of things happening, but have to say that recent chapters made me remember why this story is so freaking awesome!

Conclusion to Diana time in the Asgard ruins was great. Seems fitting that Diana gets that pseudo-Stormbreaker or Mjlionier than the original, considering as you said while back, nothing remains pure of Apokolips and Diana’s worthy soul isn’t any different. I also like how Diana is starting to see what Peter has been saying about the New Genesis gods, especially the hypocrite Douche of War being no better than his other siblings. I do have to admit, I give props to Apokolips to being upfront and honest about who they are and what they do, in fact it seems to make them more honest and somewhat more trustworthy than the ones on New Genesis, who seem to be a bunch hypocrite and racist asses.

As for the return to Earth and reunion with the Justice League, having Donna replace Wonder Woman seems appropriate, but seeing how they went farther by recruiting Canary, Arrow, and Red Tornado shows that they were desperate to fill the hole that Diana left. Also while Guy is somewhat lovable, to me he has always been a self-centered, cocky, unredeeming prick, this story shows no exception to Gardner rule. Also liked that Diana can now tell the ques of mindless drones like Parademons as a sigh that she is getting the hang of life of the dread lord’s home.

As for Peter and his quest of the stones, I find myself confused with the latest Stone he has found and a response you gave to me a while back. Since you seem to be following a track of keeping the Infinity stones in the same color as the MCU, What with the Mind Stone being yellow and the cube possibly containing the Space Stone blue, then the orange stone must defiantly be the Soul Stone, further proven by all the talk of sacrificing lives and souls to that god who’s name I won’t even bother trying to type and them all probably gathering in the stone to keep him alive. But what confuses me is that you said a while back was that the Soul Stone would be one of the last of the stones that Peter obtains, so either you seemed to have changed your plans or a plot twist seems to be approaching.

Bet that twist is that either Peter doesn’t fully obtain it without sacrificing a loved one like the stone always demands, it flies off to another point in space, or someone else takes it, probably Gamora. Also my guesses to who this mysterious person Diana is dreaming about are either Kronos, Yuga Khan, father of Darkseid and Highfather, Galactus, Knull, or that black universe ending storm deity that Galactus and Thor are currently fightingI’m the comics. As for who Gamora serves, either she serves the same person Diana is dreaming of or she is serving Galactus as one of his harolds.

I also find it humorous and curious that you compare Peter’s power level to be equivalent to Aquaman so many times and Peter is now on the same planet as Aquaman, with his clone now taking down the rest of the Intergang and plotting to kill Bruno. Something tells me that the League isn’t going to like that, especially the last one. Will we see this fight between two equal powered individuals? And will Peter be forced to reveal that existence of the stones to the League in an attempt to claim victory and complete his objective? Will Superman, after hearing of the stones and their universe changing powers, try to find them himself to rewrite reality so that Diana didn’t have to be forced into this marriage with Peter, and go on an angry rampage similar to his Injustice counterpart? And follow up question, what is your stance in making this fic a full harem and when can we see a full list of said possible harem members other than the ones that we have been introduced so far?

Also final note, I know you do this often with your stories but seeing you introduce Mortal Kombat into this fic was still such a surprise that for a second I thought you either mixed up stories or I was reading your Spider-Man/MK story, which btw I hope you get back to soon. Not that I’m complaining, just the thought of a Parademon Tarkatan has be both excited and equally terrified. Hope we get to visit Outworld but I’m alright if it is just a shout out.

In conclusion, great chapter, still amazing story, and can’t wait to see how the two gods clash and wonder if their fight will be noticed by anybody, especially more magical individuals like Dr. Fate or the Ancient One who could try and intervene. Anyways, update soon, keep up the good work, and stay safe!
Hivedragon chapter 26 . 5/1
Oh snap god battle.
Two questions #1 are the infinty stones/gauntlet their powers more MCU or comic bound?
#2 Will En Sabah Nur get his four horseman and will Peter have a hand in creating them for him?
Thanos69 chapter 26 . 5/1
Thanks for the update, the earth is dealing with SJW, feminist, LGBT I wonder how spidey will react to that.
Guest chapter 26 . 4/30
Can’t there ever be a real Justice League fanfic with Spider-Man here? Spectacular Affairs was the closest to best here. Can’t u write another Justice League Spider-Man fanfic? This one only in DC universe with only Spider-Man as the only Marvel character in it? N he gets a harem of the sexy heroines and villains from DC, Wonder Woman, Supergirl, Black Canary, Starfire, Batgirl(Barbara), Donna Troy, Hippolyta, Lois Lane, Fire, Miss Martian, Ravager, Power Girl, Hawkgirl, Zatanna, Vixen, Poison Ivy, Harley Quinn(not Arkhamverse, original), White Rabbit, Cheetah, Magpie(not Beware version), Circe, Killer Frost(Louise Lincoln but not Arkhamverse), Star Sapphire, Knockout, Mercy Graves(not DCAU, original), Talia al Ghul, Plastique(not DCAU, original). Also don’t include other media elements like Young Justice or Arrowverse, just keep it as original as possible. Also no hero bashing, have the heroes like Spider-Man n not hate n dislike him to be bashed. But Joker bashing is A-okay. Hope u would consider these things I said n see a new Justice League fanfic up soon.
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