Reviews for Senses |
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![]() ![]() ![]() lovely |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, intense! I liked what I saw, well "heard" but it was sometimes difficult to tell what was going on. I would love to see this continued! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This type of narrative writing is pretty good. I don’t mind it. The fic was funny. I like their arguments/bickering |
![]() ![]() ![]() Plz update even though it’s been a year |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so fun... gets you more imaginative than having narration ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good! Any plans on continuing? It would be really cool with other senses as well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG this is amazing please do another one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy hell. I know it has been a year, but please update this with another chapter. Was he naked the entire time? I know he got undressed bc he was muddy, but I wasn't sure. |
![]() ![]() Omg I love this Please do a part two! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Write more please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please write more! This is so cool! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Write more! This style is wonderfully unique and it's quite pleasant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so cool and really unique! Thanks for sharing your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really cool way to write a scene. Even though I already knew the pairing from the listing, even without descriptions I would've known who they were from your dialogue capturing their personalities. This was really neat, and I'd be intrigued to see how you would write the other senses. |
![]() ![]() ![]() More please! |