Ron is cheeky in cannon tho

just fantastic

This is so good and sweet. I love Hermione's appreciation for Ron's bravery. And her parents referring to the horcruxes as Voldemort's "little trinkets" is wonderful.

Hey sb! This was a very nice, fluffy story.

Grammatically, I see some problems with commas, tense, and once with singular/plural (balls drops). Other than that, I actually think the slightly dazed tone of Hermione's parents came well across from the way I remember them in the books - I think we only meet them once, but nothing in their speech led me to believe it wasn't them. I feel sorry for Hermione, though. You would think that such a sensible witch would have more sensible parents.

Ron has a more specific speech pattern, which I know is difficult to replicate, but if you wanted, you could experiment a little with that. Particular, British curse words, for an example. He's also quite straightforward. Just an idea.

I loved the Hamilton quotes - and I see only one of them was a prompt.

Other than that, I wondered about some things, like Ron liking himself to a turkey on Thanksgiving, since that's an American holiday, or how Hermione's parents don't seem to remember him, though they remember everything else. There was also a brief change in pov.

I adored the observation that Hermione doesn't think her parents trust her anymore. If there's one thing I'd love to see you work on and expand, it's that notion. It's so interesting and heartbreaking.

A very nice story.

Mal

I liked the idea you went with here - with Ron and Hermione visiting Hermione's family and telling them about their relationship. I like that they did things the Muggle way (putting on the tie for example) which is a nice mention of Hermione's Muggleborn roots.

The first part was a nice scene between the pair as they prepared themselves.

I enjoyed the awkward atmosphere between the four when they met, with the parents not really paying the relationship the attention it deserved, choosing to change the topic until Hermione states her love for Ron. I'm glad that her parents changed after that admission though. They clearly get that love is important and that Hermione's made her choice.

I don't get what you mean by Hermione doesn't know if Ron is still mourning his brother, but then state that he lost his brother weeks ago. You don't mourn for a few weeks and then get over it. I feel like Hermione would know that and would choose not to bring Ron's brother up at all. She didn't need to make a comment about that.

Ron doesn't have one less sibling just because Fred died. He still has the same amount of siblings.

You need to also watch out for tense changes. 'He took' I believe should have been 'he takes'
There were also a few spag errors (not that I can talk as I have those myself).
One more was that you put they found the Deathly Hallows. I think that should be Horcruxes.

I love this story. I thought the whole idea of Hermione's parents, her mum, in particular, not completely trusting Hermione after the memory incident was great! I always wondered how that might affect their relationship if they ever got their memories back, so I was relly happy to read it. The characters were really great and enjoyable to read, and Hermione's parents had a lot of depth, which was great. A lovely story.

Aww this was a lovely bit of fluff! I really enjoyed reading it and I like how Hermione could pick up on Ron's insecurities pretty quickly. It was great to see that Hermione wasn't going to skirt around the edges about the fact she loved Ron and that she was holding his hand under the table for his comfort was so sweet. I found the comparison to a patient about to undergo anaesthesia hilarious and I think this was a lovely story!

Aaaww, this was so cute!
There certainly aren't enough fics with Ron and Hermione and her parents, so I'm so very glad you wrote this!
Meeting the girlfriends parents... that's always the tricky part :D Poor Ron! But I am actually surprised that Hermione's dad takes the news better than her mum, but it's nice to see it the other way round :)
Very nicely done! ~Lexi~

I liked this, it was nice and fluffy, and the interaction of Hermione and Ron was nice to read. You also managed to capture the tension of the meeting with Hermione's parents very well, and the conversation was good, though I sometimes felt like they were too sceptic. If I remember correctly, Hermione's parents were rather excited about everything in the wizarding world, and they didn't appear like people who would think Hermione (an intelligent, rational person) tells them tales. Though the aspect of her removing their memories surely could have brought some problems, I liked that you mentioned that.

Aww this was very cute. I'm not a Romione fan, but this was very nice to read. I loved 'meeting the parents' scenarios, and this worked out quite well. I liked the way you built up the 'parents preferring Harry' thing leading to the 'I love him' revelation - that was a clever set-up, and it made the scene pretty fun to read.
All in all, this was a pretty nice story :)
Cheers!

This was cute. Drunk Ron is very interesting and I don't usually like Ron all that much.

This was a nice chapter, I liked that it was Ron's turn to reassure Hermione, that's sweet when they help each other out. "How about Sir Ronald and his lady Fair Hermione?" That was really cute, something I can definitely see Ron say. And I loved the line where Hermione told Ron that she'd be kicking him out of bed if he spoke medieval language in their bed, that was just great. Great job with this chapter.

I really enjoyed this! That last line from Ron was outrageously hilarious and I love how the two of them influence each other. I loved seeing the little nods to the duration of their relationship: Hermione complaining that he's not romantic/inventive enough is an example. It makes the relationship seem more real and like it has history (which it does). Lovely bit of fluff!

Awe this was really cute. I liked how you wrote Hermione and Ron; it's a shame that Hermione's parents didn't really seem to understand what Hermione went through or the fact that she's in love with Ron (Although I'm happy that Hermione's father is giving Ron a chance). Also a couple of things that I noticed Ron's eyes are blue, not green. The m in Muggle should be capitalized. Always remember, m in Muggle, M in Muggleborn, P in Pureblood should always be capitalized. I liked how Hermione reassured Ron that she loved him and not Harry, and I'm happy that Ron admitted that he didn't realize his feelings for Hermione early on. Great job on this!

Really cute and funny. I loved the whole thing.