please update

Love this! Hope you update!

Hey, I really like your book! I love Red, I am constantly looking for more books that show this side of Allen. It's just interesting to see the rude bratty kid that is our polite and kind Allen Walker. Anyway, you should update soon, I am really into your story and I can't wait to find out what happens next. Like when will they meet Lavi and bookmen. And when will Red active his innocence. And when does Red start gambling and playing poker? Ooooh, and when does General Cross come in too. I l love him too. Hmmm, will General Cross become Red's master? Anyway sorry for rambling on. I just really like your story and I want to read the next chapter if you're still going to continue this story. Thanks for reading my comment. :)

God bless Jerry! always there when you need him.

Will there be more?

Oh this is amazing, can't wait for Red to activate
Can't wait for the next chapter

This is AWESOME! Please continue!

Awesome work! Please keep it up! I love you D. Gray Man stories! They're the best!

Makes you wanna kick the CROW where it REALLY hurts the most.

This is a very interesting story. I would say to tone down Red's sailor mouth since he doesn't really need to curse whenever he's being rude but I think I'm too late for that.
Hope to see an update on this soon.

When the next chapter comin out?

Wow, this is really good. Glad I found this fanfic and I hope you continue

I honestly was surprised to see your angle of Red being taken by the order. The plot is well thought out and I enjoy Lenalee's, Allen's and Kanda's interactions. Red at this point is exactly how you've written him, and his choices of word use are in my opinion, in character. I'm glad to see them growing on each other. I wasn't sure with Red's mouth and Lenalee's (for the most part)! Innocent self. Please continue if you want to. I will read on and review.!

I think Allen activation and innocent also play a role in his white hair, if it was only trauma his hair should have grown red at the rout until all his white fall out, exemple Tokyo ghouls

Woowoo red is quick with his words, plans ahead and knows how to take pain. This would have been an awesome spin off to the show!