Dude I love it but like, show don’t tell.

Ignore Jaehee she is just jealoussss!
Actually I wanted to ask why you wrote they chatted under the sun. Isn't it supposed to be in the evening?
Keep writing okay?

-Haika

Ahhhhh this is so sweet.. I can't even..
Please continue the story..
I love it so much!

omg i just finsht zen rout and omg omg i want more! ;)

Really good, just as imagined it :3

I love him soooo much ;_;

this is good