Reviews for Key Brothers |
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Guest chapter 9 . 4/10 I am loving this story and I hope you plan on continuing it. |
Guest chapter 9 . 4/8 There both in the wrong |
slpytlak chapter 9 . 11/24/2019 I hope Roxas forgives Sora for lashing out at him. |
Jumamoy chapter 9 . 10/18/2019 Well that escalated quickly. wasn't expecting a chapter full of angst and drama. |
MaxJackson47 chapter 5 . 10/14/2019 I think the concept for this is pretty cool, but as I read more and more, it seemed oddly centered on a pairing of SoKai. Which there's nothing wrong with, I just wish it was made clear before I read, as SoKai isn't my thing. In fact, in these sorts of fics, I like it to be neutral, maybe some side pairings and stuff. I'd just recommend putting that in the description. As I'm reading this, it seems less of "How will these 4 brothers survive?" And more of "What are Sora and Kairi gonna do next? And how will the others tease him about it?" Which wasn't what I signed up for. I feel like the experience is dragged down by needless pairings, and when I read through this chapter, the 4 or so times SoKai was very obviously hinted at, I felt like it was a slog and it was incredibly uncomfortable and seemed to come from absolutely nowhere. Which is a shame because I really wanted to get invested into this story, but I feel misled because the first day of High School was almost exclusively about SoKai, and I can't trust the rest of the story to be much different than what I've already seen. I just thought to give you some constructive criticism so you don't accidentally lead someone into reading something they didn't want to. |
Clivingston chapter 9 . 10/11/2019 This chapter hit me deep... Love it! |
Ima Nonyme chapter 9 . 10/4/2019 Holy fuck guys! JUST TELL HIM THE FUCKING TRUTH! |
Estrangero chapter 7 . 4/12/2019 A story about the their dad pls? |
Jumamoy chapter 5 . 3/15/2019 Happy to know you're back! Keep up the good work! |
Ima Nonyme chapter 5 . 3/15/2019 Roxas, Ven... You abandonned your precious little brother, his first day in a new school... Bad~ Sora was happy with his best friends! |
sasukessweetheart chapter 5 . 3/15/2019 That was perfect I enjoyed it. I loved it actually. Update soon please. |
Jumamoy chapter 4 . 10/5/2018 A very heart warming fic. I hope you can still work on this fic. |
Ima Nonyme chapter 4 . 8/11/2018 So fluffy... And cute! ** |
Ima Nonyme chapter 3 . 1/3/2018 Vani... No! Just no! So, Sora looks like a kitten... CUTE! Hey NinjaQueen! Come back, your fic is so cool! Don't go! :( |
SeliaHewrts chapter 1 . 12/30/2017 nicely done and really cute |