Reviews for Just add a Y |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Is it just me or does jaune chuckle and sigh a lot? Other than that the story is great |
![]() ![]() ![]() Phew, this story really needs a beta, quite a few spelling and word-tense errors, not to mention some poor sentence structures. Otherwise it's an interesting premise, be interesting to see how Jaune being the only male to have aura affects things. Surprisingly lack of misandry and such so far, although I guess it makes sense for his team to baby him since they still probably stuck in the mindset of male weaker and thus needs protecting. |
![]() ![]() Jaune is actually a little taller than 6ft. So being in a 6 by 6 room closet... its a closet and he can't even lay down straight. That's mean, poor Jaune. |
![]() ![]() ![]() jerome looks like a brother in arms tbh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do i see a harry and dumbledore kindoff relationship with jaune and olivia? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Always loved this concept |
![]() ![]() Good story keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And it was at this moment Jaune knew he screwed up |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Because he is interesting." Because I want a male body with Aura when I reincarnate, Ozma thought. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ozma: Yes! I can see my wife again and get to live out our lives again in peace, I may even get to have children! *Gets reincarnated* Finally, I can find my wife and OH GOD MY DICK IS GONE! *Many many many years later* Well after years of crying I think I finally came to terms that I will always be a woman and... *Female Qrow comes barging in* Qrow: Olivia a male has unlocked his Aura! Ozma: WHAT THE FUCK THAT SHOULD HAVE BEEN ME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dimitry Petrenko makes a mad rush for escaping under fire from German troops (1942, colourized) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jaune later ended up in a tragic locker room showdown protecting Crocea Jr. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That’s assault of a government officer ms. Mayor you are under arrest |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch 25 in which there is much flinching |
![]() ![]() ![]() Previous chapters were light in spelling errors but this one (ch19) has too many. Please try to proofread a little better or get a friend on the site to do it. Otherwise this has been a very entertaining chapter. |