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   HazelGraceLancaster394 chapter 1 . 5/24/2018 This was really good I'd love to see it continued |
| the17thmuse chapter 1 . 5/4/2017 Any Anakin fix-it fic is good enough for me:) Episode III shattered my heart into a million brittle pieces. |
| Kondoru chapter 1 . 11/4/2016 Yes, anything to prevent that horrifying reveal at the end of Rebels Season 2... (And she still wants to be with him.) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2016 Very nice great idea and well written it has plenty of emotion and you capture the character's well im really hoping you will continue this i would like you to make them a couple as well they make such a good couple |
| YellowSpeedyNinja chapter 1 . 10/9/2016 would love to see this continued |
| ravenknight117 chapter 1 . 9/29/2016 Will you expand on it ? It seems like a good start to a great story. |
| Aziz chapter 1 . 9/27/2016 How typical is it that you're nagged about Padme in your first review? Some people can't relax unless the world doesn't revolve around bloody Padme. /Salt You're so good, and a young writer I suppose? Keep it up, because this is what I call ORGANIC CHARACTERS/INTERACTION. That's such a skill, it's something I wish I was good at. The emotion and cleverness of your writing muse has much clarity. You're good. I don't feel like Anakin was OOC, Ahsoka was great. I'm just so impressed with the writing quality though? Srsly. Organic. The beach vacation was so adorable and so corny, I loved that last bit and I kind of imagined them together at a tiki bar. They both really have been through a lot together, a lovely fact you pointed out. I'm glad that Ahsoka saved him by giving Anakin a choice. She wasn't there to beg Anakin, she simply prodded him and gave him a choice about leaving with her. |
| t chapter 1 . 9/19/2016 Nice start. at least your making Ahsoka leaving the order more positive. |
| Samwise Skywalker chapter 1 . 9/17/2016 wow that was amazing. Just to think how things could have turned out differently for Anakin if he had gone with her. Really hope you consider continuing with this and have it very slowly turn into a Anakin/Ahsoka romance :) |
| Darth Bane01 chapter 1 . 9/15/2016 would much like a continuation of this |
| DeWun chapter 1 . 9/15/2016 Awesome writing! You should definitely consider writing an Anisoka. (follow up maybe) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2016 I really want to see Padme join the family. She and Anakin are married. I would love to see how the twins (Luke and Leia) eventually factor in. |
