Hey this story is great. Your writing is really good and I think you got the emotions out really well. I could just feel Derek's sarcasm and pain and him and Casey's interactions were great. I know this hasn't been updated in a while but I hope you'll finish this story one day because I'd love to read more.

We need more!

Oh god. this is like the third time I've read this and I just need more. I need answers and a resolution! I love the way it's written!

still waiting for an updatee XD !

i love it, i love it, i loooove it! Please keep going

This is so good. Please write more.

Oooh! I love Derek in this - his thoughts are super fun to read! I like a pining Derek so that's right up my alley as well *shrugs*

yes yes yes ...omg you're doing this yeeeeessssssss thankkkk you ..so so so much ..also i love a scheming Derek XD ! update soon !

Poor Derek. I feel for him.

Ok. Stop whatever you're doing and write more. Please, oh please? This was great (excellent really) but I just can't. No, this can't end like this. You're killing meeeee.

Dude ! update ...please ...please update ...god yes my poor boy ... ah I love his thoughts ... XD ... this is so awesome ...please please please update please ...a dasey fic after so many days ...please don't leave it half way ...your awesome !

Derek's thoughts were hilarious, loved every minute

This was so good! And heartbreaking. We're introduced to this Derek as someone who knows he's in like (love) with Casey, but will never let anything become of that. Throughout the story he slowly becomes more okay with the idea that, yeah, maybe he shouldn't love her as much as he does, but they could get on this way. They could be happy. But then it all comes crashing down around him, the life he'd planned out in his head. He's not in love with Casey, he's in love with his step-sister, because that's all anyone will ever see her as to him. And maybe if she'd known that his love for her was true, and that, yes, it's okay to love him back, or that the "step" isn't as important as the "love," then maybe something could have happened. But it's truly heartbreaking to watch his world fall down around him when he realizes she's a victim of this unfortunate circumstance just as much as he is.

Sorry for the analysis, lmao. I just have a lot of feelings about the story and couldn't even get them all written down, haha, but I really did enjoy this story. Would love to maybe see Casey's side of the story (?). Thank you for this fic!

Yikes well that is the most saddest dasey story I've read that I can remember