Been a year since the last update hope you're doing okay.

i love how yang can't keep her hands to herself that she needs to be tied down by blake if she failed controlling herself. What a beast indeed.

So, I don't know how to start this.
I have a long story reading fanfics and wattpad, probably since I was 12. I'm 23 now. You know what? I'm just gonna go straight to the point. In my hole life I have read so many stories all over the internet and I swear I have never felt what I feel wile reading your story, especially with this ship that I love but I'm not too attached with, but after reading this, it burn a scar in my heart.
I dont even know how to praise your writing, your point of view of this relationship. the way you literally scratched and analyze every single piece the original series give us, and make this character development they both didn't have in the course of events of the main series. the way you just get what their minds can be dealing with. And so so many subjects that the crwby team thought they didn't matter, but on the contrary it did. you just proved that.
YOU are so much better writer than the crwby, you give me a perspective I could never imagine I would have if I haven't read you story. you even put all of the pieces of Adam's character to make it fit on a narrative that it make sense. you make them have a personality that I would never ever forget.
I didn't even realized how much I NEEDED THE TALK, in the main series that doesn't exist. and you made it. you just fill the hole that I didn't know it was in my heart.
so, what I'm trying to say is Thank you. you had made an amazing work and I'm so grateful to been able to read it. thank you so so much for making this. I dont even know if you're going to continue it, and I'm not selfish enough to ask you to keep going with it. I have known from a close view how the process of a writer is, and how complicated it can be. so I'm here just to say thank you. I'm so grateful to have found your story and enjoy it.
forever, thank you.

I hope you update this again soon it's really good.

This is really amazing, you are so so talented. To me this is what happened, your story is so credible, it all makes sense, it fills in all the blanks and helps us better understand all that happened “behind the scene”. I also love Weiss role’s in the story, she was so supportive, I found myself appreciating her more and more thanks to you. I am also dumbfounded at how you somehow “predicted” that bumblebee would happen. If you think about it what you wrote at the end of V3 falls right in place after the release of V5, I find it hard to believe it was coincidence, you nailed the plot right on spot (no pun intended). I can’t wait to see what you’ll right in Chapter 10 (especially yang’s and blake next intimate moment after so long) I do hope she puts her arm back for it, it would allow for a much hotter scene I think. Anyhow amazing work, it had me glued on my phone for 3 days, can’t wait for the update!

Please update! I’m still waiting..

what a fantastic story

Please Keep it up

I don't leave reviews. Normally just read a story then come back to it whenever I see an update for it. But this one has had me coming back even though there haven't been updates for it. This has been wonderful to read. Thoroughly enjoyed the way you built this story and how you wrote the characters. I'm not a writer nor am I a reviewer. But I know what I like. And this has been an experience to read. I hope that you will continue this fanfic. Waiting on the next chapter with baited breath.

omg please update soon this is my fav RWBY fic your incredibly talented at writing

Awesome story. 10/10

I adore this fic and you for the effort that you have so obviously put into it. It is exactly the sweet, sexy, extremely emotional fic that you find only a few times in each fandom. I will absolutely read anything you continue to post for this fic, canonical or not, filler or not - you have earned my absolute trust and enjoyment. Thank you for doing God’s work.

Now I'm done with exams and finally got to read this update! It was longer than I expected and that's totally awesome. Let me tell you, this is one of the best chapters I've read of this story. I'm really...how can I say this...I'm captivated by this chapter. How they resolved things, how precisely and sweet things were done, that realistic touch. I just loved it. Looking forward to the next chapter. Good luck.

First off, you can't prove I'm crying. Don't even try.
Second, I love the pacing throughout. It accomodates what happens in canon with the blank spaces that aren't used to tell a story; and its a gooooood story! Everyone is beautifully, wonderfully, emotional and flawed to a more intimate extent then in the show and I LIKES!
While I'd argue against the whole 'Cyberpunk Dysporia" thing, I get that's also a problem of Yang's mental and physical truama and it makes for an excellent problem to be overcomed.
Thirdly, you have successfully made me remember and reinforce my seething nuclear hatred of Adam McCumRag-Tausus (In this context, he married a cum rag and lost the divorce).
Like Blake is an amazing character and a gift to the earth and hearing that Adam did such disgustingly immoral actions is enough to add a few more cracks to my phones screen.
All in all however, this is an Awesome fic, I got emotionally invested way too fast, and you are AWESOME.

Fourthly;
Blake: "You're the most precious thing in my life,"
Yang: "We're already there,"
Me: /BJa5KiA7uH0

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AN AMAZING, AND I MEAN - AAAAAAAMMMAAAAAAZZZIIIIINNNGGGG CHAPTER THIS ONE IS. GOOOODNESSSS GRAAAACIOUS. *seizures, dies, waits for next chapter as a ghost*