This is fun

Very good

I know authors don't like it when people ask for more but where you ended it was just mean... also awesome story also wondering will jaune get a "cute" talking animal friend?

Interesting chapter and story so far it is very interesting.

This is really good. Fantastic even. Keep it up.

This is fantastic. A very special crossover, really; Ron's homesickness (and Roman-Kim and other comparisons) just hurt in a good way.

Love this so much. Such a unique and fascinating story, please keep it up.

Kay this story is Bella awesome instant favorite

Its interesting so please update

Update Silver.

Another awesome chapter. :)

Update Silver.

This is a pretty interesting story you have here. Looking forward to future chapters.

Quick question though why isn't this marked as a crossover story?

I just found this cute little story. Okay, I'm hooked. I must have a soft spot in my heart for Ron being caught in the RWBY universe.

Ron hasn't turned evil, he's just trying to survive. Surviving with Torchwick and Neo. Talk about sleeping with one eye open all the time...

You've given the Lotus Blade its own unique personality. I think that's the first time I've seen that tactic.

I like the premise and how things are working out. Ron brings a lot to the game - intimate knowledge on what works in the criminal world (what the 'good guys' notice), his cooking, the Lotus Blade and his essential Ronness.

Even the homicidal Neo seems to taken a liking to Ron - she hasn't killed him yet. (If you ship them, I want to be around for their first fight.)

Ruby has now taken an unhealthy obsession with Ron, who seems to be channeling Shego and enjoying it.

When Cinder makes her appearance, then Ron will see true evil. Not Shego-level or even Neo-level evil but murderous evil. Evil that both Neo and Torchwick fear. I'm waiting to see how Ron deals with that.

Good Job.

update the story Vanilla Swirl i really want to know what happen nexts