I love it. So much. It's wonderful and awesome, and I love that ending in the end.

Why?! WHY?! *cries* this is so amazing as well as the other one! It's so... so... I don't know anymore!
You make the best angst story ever! You made me see them, Mabel, Bill and Gideon, in a very new light!

I love Storge and Counterpart! BEST!

That was too cute 3

Weeeell that was brilliantly written and quite emotional, to be honest. I never really thought about why Bill trapped Mabel in a dream world rather than just turning her to stone or killing her like the rest of the villagers. I suppose we'll never know the answer, but I guess I'll just go about considering this to be my personal canon, then. I really really enjoyed this piece, simply because it highlighted the love between the twins so well while at the same time keeping Bill almost perfectly in character, which is something that I (sadly) rarely ever see in GF fanfics. This was just a really great fic, and thanks for writing it.

THIS IS YOUR FIRST?! THIS,*kicks down door* MASTERPIECE *smashes fist on table* IS YOUR FIRST?! THAT'S BLOODY AMAZING!

Wow, this was fascinating. I don't like MaBill, but this wasn't entirely intended to be that, was it? (At least I don't think so? I'm not sure, to be honest. xD)

I just find the idea behind this really interesting - that Bill kind of feeds on the emotions of others, and when he possesses someone, he still retains a bit of their feelings afterward. And yeah, considering he mainly possessed selfish people in the past, it would certainly be fascinating to possess someone like Dipper - who isn't bad or selfish at all. So the idea of those fond and happy emotions still remaining in Bill after all this time... Seriously, this was awesome, great job!

Hey that was a really interesting take! Nice for a first fic, too!