You really write it good! I love to read from Akai’s perspectice

Great job! I love reading stories about Akai and his perspective on the situation.

I thought you did a really good job of showing his personality and the way he reacted to situations. His frustration at not being able to do anything about Vermouth was also done really well. Haibara must have left a huge impact on him when he saw her and I liked how you added in more recent bits about his parents too.

I'm not sure what other stories you've written but one on him meeting Masumi as Subaru would be interesting to read. I'm curious at what your take on Akai pretending to be Subaru would be. I thought the last line was well written. 'But he would find a way around it, he had his methods.'

I think you did a really great job, keep up the good work.

Nice story! I love reading POV's of other characters in Detective Conan who do not hold all the pieces of the puzzle, so to speak, when it comes to Conan and Ai. When you look at things from their eyes, the mystery of those two children must be maddening. I wonder what Also thinks of Conan and Ai now, so much further into the series? Has he figured out the truth about Conan being Shinichi Kudo, if he is suspicious that Haibara is probably Sherry? Also has gotten a lot more involved with Conan since this scene, so it would be fascinating to see what he thinks of the mysterious boy now.

Wonderfully written ! thanks for sharing!

Interesting!

i'm with you there ! glad he's having his own chapter ( more or less) recently _

wow great fanfic! I love Shuichi Akai and the way you portray him is very close to the job, and I hope you will write more about Shuuich, and maybe about Sherry too...