Reviews for What If The Storm Ends?
Lauraline94 chapter 6 . 6/25/2019
This was fantastic! I sat down and read it all in one go. You are a skilled writer and I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I really enjoyed the overreaction between Thace and Keith. I also felt that you had Keith's character right on point. Well done! I can't wait to read more of your stuff.
Rehabilitated Sith chapter 6 . 12/27/2018
Hahha, love exasperated parent Thance
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 2 . 11/28/2018
"not far from Coran's age"

I'd like to remind the class that Coran is around 600 year old.

This still made me giggle tho. I'd assume you were going for "middle-aged" or "40-50 human yrs".

still funny.
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 1 . 11/28/2018
This is odd to read after the whole Keith's mom's reveal thing, but it's really neat. It's an AU that could live in one reality or another. I'm sure Slav's calculated the chances more than enough times for it.
Althea Sirius chapter 6 . 7/5/2018
This was a neat idea. Even though now we know which parent was part Galra.
Althea Sirius chapter 5 . 7/5/2018
The person you least expect saves you.
Althea Sirius chapter 1 . 7/5/2018
I wonder how the others will react.
FalconRukichi chapter 6 . 12/3/2017
This is awesome story! Please continue?!
aqaws321 chapter 6 . 10/29/2017
i love this!
NoMeImporta32 chapter 3 . 7/5/2017
Nice one, Thace! I love how Keith is handling this situation. It's too funny!
NoMeImporta32 chapter 2 . 7/5/2017
Oh! This is getting good! I'm excited to see what happens next!
KnightOwl247 chapter 6 . 6/9/2017
hehehehe Ford is Han Solo. Can't sneak those Starwars references past me!
KnightOwl247 chapter 2 . 6/9/2017
ehehehehehe oh honey~ you have no idea!
KnightOwl247 chapter 1 . 6/9/2017
it was a one-eyed, one-horned, flying purple-eater! (one-eyed, one-horned flying purple-people eater) sure looked strange to me~!
Maria Albert chapter 6 . 6/8/2017
I love this story! Your portrayal of Keith and Thace, Red, the rest of the Paladins, Coran and Allura is perfect, and the relationships, plot and setting are fantastic. There was lots of secrecy, tension, family drama, alien beasts and adventure to keep us all entranced from start to finish. I can’t wait to read your sequels. Vive la Résistance!

I’m also a big fan of Thace – please check out my story Mysteries and Misimpressions if you are so inclined and have the time – I think you’ll like the twist I gave his character. I truly wish Thace was given a longer run in canon. He deserved better. Instead, he’s like Matt in Death Note: there for only a few panels and lines and then gone, yet the fandom writes novels about him. Thank you for giving him the role he deserved.
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