Some Elizabeth Bathory at the end there although it could be the evil queen from Snow White and the Huntsman. This is fantastic; your words are great at painting images. let's see what you decide!

I love what you have written so far with the exception of the "Mistress" part. But other then that I am really looking forward to the next chapter!

I really love the first 4 chapters of this story and cant wait to see what will happen next. I honestly cant say for sure who this "mistress" is-so I shall just wait and see.

This shit is dope as fuck. I want more my man I'll buy that shit all day long ;)