I feel ashamed for not having read this stellar piece when it has been right under my nose for almost a god*damn year! A clash, a contrast, a bittersweet romance and a butterfly effect that has rippled beyond sane thinking. I loved it!

The frustration between the two characters was almost palpable- even without much dialogue- not just sexual, but on a deeper level. I liked the way you chose to word it, and I liked the short-kept sentences, but most of all I LOVED the sexy, smutty, steamy rough love scene!

It's as if these two will forever have something keeping them apart- a minuscule something- but the love between them is so strong that the magnetic pull eventually pulls them close before the elastic band eventually snaps once more! Great work, K!

I quite enjoyed that. Lovely. Nicely done. The ache for Jerza is real and something I constantly crave. Jellal is just... perfect.
Good stuff.
-Freyja

Don't know why but apparently I'm in love with messes! And this one is the gorgeous af!

I'm not usually one for JerZa, but I love this. I'm curious as to the rest of their story in this particular universe, why they're not together and all that, but I love it just the way it is. Great job, as always!

I read it twice. I love your writing so much, it's really beautiful

Wow. They are so ... well, just perfect. So ... themselves. And this piece is skillfully designed, not a mess. Not at all. Hope you are fine, author, by the way. Thanks a lot for these feelings.

(she always has been able
to tell with just a look at his eyes) True.

So- they were dating... D: but ''not'' anymore.

((He's still paying attention,
because he still cares about what she thinks of him.)) Oh~ interesting...

((He's always thinking about her.) I just notice that. My heart is crying because of these two.

((slips through the sheets and sides right up against her, because more than ever, he wants – no, needs – to encircle his arms around her and to bury his face in her scarlet tresses. He hears her sigh (he's never been able to differentiate her sighs when she's relieved or when she's disappointed)) The tension and the needy is tangible.

((And god knows why they can't live forever with each other because they can't live a single moment without each other either))
*sigh* *sigh* *sigh x 1000* Oh my~ I'm 'oxygenless' (I don't think that word exist, in case not, I just invented for you xD)

Hope they can fix their lives, I think that the love is there.

Thanks for writing, beautiful and full of sentiments.

PD: Be strong, girl. Best wishes and fan love for you~! *hearts* NwN

Ugh this is gorgeous.