I hate carrot now

i hate how it ended it was better with luffy and carrot

Why the actuall fuck did I just read? ._.

dear lord no.

Okay, so for all intents and purposes I should not give a fuck and just ignore this. However, given this is the only Luffy x Carrot fic in existence right now, I am incapable of doing so. So here's the thing, there is nothing in this fic; it doesn't capture the character's personalities, quirks, or even how they would regularly react to things. It's just like "Carrot liekz Luffy, Luffy liekz Carrot, they fuck. Chopper joins in" which would be great if this was erotica, but even then the actual erotica is very sub-par and empty. So it doesn't work as a story, it doesn't work as a pairing, and it definitely doesn't work as porn. That's not even bringing up the numerous grammar mistakes, but I digress. Carrot and Luffy work well together because they're so similar, but if you can't even get down the most basic of their quirks besides "luffy eats a lot", then that can't be captured. I'd have a lot more to say on how to improve this, but honestly the very premise is broken from the start and I don't want to just say "Hey, re-write all of this", and I honestly don't think you care since you just ended with Carrot fucking Chopper. Given this is clearly supposed to be erotica, then I can't help you.

A inusual ship

Okay so I have read some of your comments and am open to other things also sorry about the huge wait I promise to keep new chapters every week.

Can you do one with chopper and carrot because i ship them and no I not a furry fan

I have read all 3 chapters, and now I wish to vomit. Many of the sentences have either words missing, or words added in that don't belong. Also, the lack of spacing in the last chapter drove me crazy. Either learn from this and fix it, let someone with talent adopt this story, or delete it altogether.

Interesting you should continue.

i like this ship

Seems good, wish you could space the talking so it makes it easier to read. Keep up with the story.

Can you do another one please

More! This is so good! More carrot!