I loved reading this story. A lot different to what i usually read in the TMNT fandom.
I loved the ways the characters were not a copy paste of personalities from the TV show. Since its a different timeline and they were alone growing up it made for a really refreshing perspective.

Great job. :)

I'M SORRY, THAT WAS A DREAM?! WHAT? :-(

Wow this story is intense! I love it so far. Please say that the brothers will save Mikey!? Mikey sacrificed himself to save Raph from being consumed by evil, he has to still be alive in there! Please don't let Mikey be destroyed! Bring him back!

O.o wow didn't see that coming, mikey makes a pretty good bad guy but I would really like for him to be saved it's not fair to take him away after they fix ally started to bond as a family

Nooooooooooooo! It's a lie why u do that Oh come on :'(

Wait wait wait. You killed Leo...er... Ryuunosuke... What ever. You killed him?! Why?!...but...but. NONONONO. Leo, baby, hang in there!
But great writing. It's written so well.

Ok so donnie will not be the next shredder, i wonder if they will start treading mikey (shin) as the youngest brother

Donnie is going to be the new shredder o.o lol

So Isamu is now a lot like Raphael.

A-W-E-S-O-M-E IT IS SO CREATIVE. AMAZING JOB )

I am enjoying the story so far. It is a bit sad that Splinter does not see his sons grow up though. Looking forward to your next update. Try and play around with dialogue (you known ""). The story is good but in this format with no talking, it gets sort of drab. Still good though. ; )

CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
LOVE THIS STORY

What a gem! Cant wait for the next chap! Keep up the good work!

Awesome thank you have a wonderful imagination. I can't wait to send what will happen to Leonardo and who his master is.

Poor Master splinter