I loved this. Bayley and Seth do make an awesome couple and oddly make more sense than she and dean do in some stories especially with heel rollins.

I was eagerly awaiting more Bayllins from you and boy did you not disappoint! This was everything!

I love you gave us a continuation of your Bayley/Seth start and showed that these two are so entwined in each other and weren't really sure how or when it had happened but it did...we knew it was gonna happen but neither turned away from being together and I'm swooning. These two are precious! I love how easily Bayley fell and although Seth had to think for a moment he knew he was in love with this woman.

These two are my everything Gina, I seriously mean that. Like she softens that hard shell exterior and brings about a real guy...and he brings her out and about, like into a new world more gritty and a bit dark but...oh. God I love these stories with the bright ol ray of sunshine and that dreary/scary/sinister darkness. (Seth is more on the dreary side but...I'm rambling. Anywho.). The way you make these two work is astounding and goes beyond perfect. You knocked this out of the park once again dear. You have the characters down, the feels to sweep us up in and just...dude it is always so perfect from you! With everything! Good girl in this is like my drug...god you don't even know and gurl...that sex. There is something so romantic yet spicy with the two...just steamy yet you can feel the love, like a bit of fluff or and hey lets drizzle some nice ooey gooey caramel right on top to give it that ooh la la... ... ... ...-Facepalm- Ignore my stupid ass. lmao!n No idea why I thought of that and shhh! I may or may not be on night time medication. lol But...these two need to experiment with that another time cause yes! But before I get even more lost I wanna say I love you for this, this beautiful writing, the cute little Bayllins universe you gave me, just thank you for it all. Always so perfect. :D

Great stuff! I never thought Seth and Bayley would be such a great pair, but you've done a great job with them. Both the plot and smut scenes were really well done. I like your new screenname, too. Hope we get another Dean and Charlotte fic soon :)

love it

Wow, so good as always! Loved how you captured Bayley's childishness without going overboard as some authors, including myself, do sometimes. It's really hard to write her and get the characterization correct, but I think you did a wonderful job in this one. I do have to ask if you started this before the Sasha and Bayley twitter war over Seth or if this sprang from that and it was just a happy coincidence?

Omg! This seems to now be the favorite couple for authors and I love it. The good girl with the rebel anti-hero. They're so good together. Though I must say, Bayley and Roman are sexy too.
I loved the chemistry Bayley has with Seth and how he accepts her for who she is despite her not being his type. The sexy was mind blowing too...and kinky. Lol!
I hope you write more of this couple and also more Roman/Bayley.