*blush* *blsuh* *blush* *bluuuuuuuuuuuuuush* *nosebleed*

that's it ? TT

i didn't know you could write lemon, author-sama XD
though not too detailed, it's quite good!

Make it m rated. Theres not a lot of takumisa lemon in here.

just lemony enough without going overboard. love it! happy birthday misa!

Great fanfic! There's definitely some lemony stuff going on here so yeah I think it would be better if you rate it M, for the sake of younger viewers/readers or those who simply want to avoid this sort of fanfic...For me I think its a great fanfic that shows their relationship on the next level (cute and sexy)...I suggest that if you're going to write stories with sexual content ( like this one), rate it M just to be on the safe side,you dont want people to flag you for giving it a false rating...anyway I like your stories you never disappoint us -

Bro, you wrote 500 words on a detailed scene of oral sex; you should totally rate this M. I mean... not trying to be a dick or anything, but there are some people who don't browse the M section to avoid this type of content. You could get flagged for violating the guidelines, so be careful in order to avoid problems. If you have any doubts, please read the rating criteria of the site.

This was...sweet and not too dscriptive. You never fail to amaze me, MissKireiUchiha. :D