I’m so sad. Will we never find out what Kanoko did to the Hyuugas for her brother? T.T

I was enjoying the fic until this chapter. What a marysue you made of an what used to be an interesting character

He knowwwws!

I don’t think ever laughed so hard throughout a fic. You did a great job writing your own take on canon events. I do hope that one day you continue writing this or at least provide a summary on what would have happened. Thanks for keeping me intrigued throughout the whole story!

This is a crack Fic and I admit I’ve been intrigued..but I’ll be honest.. I can’t read this anymore.. I’m unable to pinpoint why, perhaps it’s not the kind of humour I enjoy (exaggerated) or just because naruto himself is more of a headache in usual, or because of the drama( ridiculous, i don’t mind drama so I don’t know why it’s bothering me) but yea, can’t pinpoint it but this is where I stop. Thankyou for the fun read, this isn’t your fault, you’re writing a perfectly acceptable story, just your writing style doesn’t suit me (I subconsciously correct, edit work and scenes are rushed towards the end, chaotic; If I do this for long, it gives me a migraine. ) Best of luck with the rest of your story!

This is quite possibly the best reincarnation au I've ever read. The character isn't super strong automatically as a child but has to work up to using their skills and even adapting to a new body that has different limitations than their first. They make mistakes, there are threats out there that they aren't completely prepared for. Teamwork! Friendship! Tobirama attempting to atone for his past mistakes by helping Sasuke rebuild the Uchiha clan (hopefully into something that will be a credit to the Will of Fire). (I absolutely love Kanoko being not attracted to anyone, hooray for a non-pairing focused story, ace pride! (Even if I'm pretty sure it's got a bit more to do with the body dysphoria that she subtly has.) I seriously hope you don't actually pair her up with anyone, but especially not someone who doesn't know she was Tobirama.) Being proud of Hiruzen while still disappointed in some of the choices he made. The angst over one of Tobirama's students going so far against the Will of Fire/protecting the children mentality Tobirama died for, ugh, I know other people might get to it but I really want to see Tobirama let Danzo know just how very disappointed in him he is.

I know this is several years old and probably abandoned but just so you know it was great. I spent the last couple days devouring this whole fic and I love it.

Naruto much more annoying and idiotic that what he was in canon plus he is kinda nerfed. His stupidity is astounding and not even the least bit realistic. His whole character and actions are cringe worthy. I hate this story.

If only I can press like again and again, without limit of once per person, probably I would have broke it with the many times your fic impress me.

I'm rlly close to getting to my knees n beg you to continue this story. Maybe it will irritate you, but this is such a brilliant work and I love it too much to not ask you to continue it. Please come back and finish this story.

this is priceless!

all sorts of crap? hm...

So I have a major problem where I only read a fanfic with an OC, but holy jdhfsdufhs holyshitholyshitholyshitholyshitholyshitholyshit. I really had been avoiding this fanfic on my reading list but I have an unholy Tobirama obsession so I was like "what the hell" and dove right in. First impressions were AMAZING, this idea is so creative I stayed up until 2AM to catch up with the fanfic. You portray Tobirama amazingly, and there is literally so much potential with this story. I keep thinking about edo tensei in the Fourth Shinobi War and where you could go with that, because that would be an emotional WHIRLWIND. I hope you get back into this story (I know its been 3 yrs but a girl can dream) because I am obsessed lol. After chapter 22, I called my friend (who I gave a brief rundown about Naruto a week prior) and just RANTED about how creative this fic was.

Dude story was good update more

Man I always enjoy this story. I loved how she ended the match with those last three meaningful moves. Each represents something special and was gained at important events. I've read this story several times since I found it in 2016. Thanks for posting. I look forward to any future updates. :)

Poor Hinata, victim of her family's reputation.

Really loving this story so far. I was surprised that Kanoko would replace Sasuke in team 7 instead of replacing Sakura but maybe that's for the best (I do wonder how she'd have dealt with having a Uchiha on her team though).

I think there might be a mistake in one of the last sentences or maybe I'm just too tired to make sense of it: "Kanoko wasn't she what good Sakura was going be to Shikamaru, but maybe she and Hinata were friends or something..."