Really nice sad Story, i Really like your writing Skills! Like how you potrayed the pairing!

Holy fuck the up shit FUCK

I knew what was going to happen yet I'm still heartbroken. I liked reading about the development of their relationship. Finding out exactly why Varrick punched Raiko was nice. Great job!

So sad. I think the worst part is the building dread because we know what's coming, and yet can't help but root for these two. I wish there was a little bit more of Skoochy, because he and Kai do seem like a lot of fun here, but he isn't the focus. I really like the relationship you built here, even if it does end in tragedy. Proper job, mate.