Reviews for Soul Purpose |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love your writing and I enjoy reading about Fran and dave. Can you write some more stories about Dave and fran? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was sexy! Love the description of her flashback! Woo . Lovinggg this story ! I hope the wife is okay now that that agent is paying her a visit after Morgan left. I’m shocked he didn’t notice the black vehicle neither knowing older models align that street |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very impressive with those 1st two scenes! It got me riled up as if you went into details with their love making! Love it! So skillful! It was hot! Lol. Lucky Pen, I wish Derek would wake up feeling on me too with his fingers and his tongue! Lmao |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fiyahhhhh ! The best chapter yet ! Aha! I’m so proud of Garcia ! For ONCE someone has given her balls cause in allll these stories she’s just so, Penelope *shrugs lol. This was a breathe of fresh air for real ! I’m loving this new Garcia! She whispered 4 minuets LMAOOOO. That was awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Lordy Lord ! *covers eyes and peeks through fingers. Ay yi yiiii ! Definitely about to be some TROUBLES in paradise ! Poor Derek lol . Penelope is gonna slice his (inserts profanity here) LOL. But GREAAAAAAAT STORY SO FAR! As ALWAYSSSSS, your writing is SUPERB my friend! Ahh it’s like a breathe of fresh air! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what an ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a wonderful ending for a fantastic story! This final chapter made me cry! In the end, they all got what they so richly deserved and fought for! They received their love, family and true happiness! I’m so happy that Emily found her love again and kept it this time! Her and Avery were meant for each other! She deserves all of it! The white picket fence, a loving husband and 2.5 kids! I’m ecstatic that the wives forgave their hubby’s. Although, I’m positive they stayed in the doghouse for a long time to come! Hehehehe! And, they deserved it! Penelope did a lot of growing and figured out many things. She finally realized that deep down she didn’t want Derek to change who he was. He is the man she fell in love with and would always treasure him. He was a hero...her Hero! He is who he is and that man adores her and their two beautiful daughters and their whole family! His love, commitment and honor runs deep! He is the man of my dreams, for sure! Hehehehe! Another brilliant and outstanding story! Thank you my friend for sharing your talent with us! Kudos! |
![]() ![]() ![]() An awesome ending to an awesome story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great ending |
![]() ![]() ![]() pen would literally do as what she says |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why does it always have to be you? I loved that line in Mayhem and still love it now! Hehehehe! You go Pen! Tell him like it is! Did Dave get shot? If so where? Pénélope and Fran think exactly alike! They both want to kill them both! Lol! Thank god everyone is going to be alright! Derek is finally on the mend! At least Derek finally knows about the baby! Although, both of them are still in the doghouse! Hehehehe! I wonder how Spencer is handling all of this! Will we get to find out? Awesome as always! Can’t wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally everyone is getting what they want. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yesssss our babies are all back together and I soooooo can't wait for the final chapter, awesome job girlie, awesome job |
![]() ![]() ![]() no what happened? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god no no no no no DEREK CANT DIE NEITHER CAN DAVE OR EMILY noooooooo |