Reviews for An Unexpected Visitor
BadPlace chapter 5 . 1/30/2017
Eeeekkkkk, HERE IT COMES! Agh. So. Much. Anticipation. Anyway, I love this story!
The Mocking J chapter 5 . 1/30/2017
I love how Flora is slowly getting to know Desmond, and I'm curious to find out who she reminds him of! :D
Meme Queen chapter 4 . 1/27/2017
i like this so far! im a sucker for the bronev family,,, but listen maybe make the chapters a bit longer? i mean tbh im not 1 to talk but believe me spend a little more time n itll look great ily n i love this
Meme Queen chapter 1 . 1/27/2017
GFGXHIDK SUCKS TO BE DESMOND! Aalso yasss go off flora dont take no shit
BadPlace chapter 4 . 1/23/2017
Augh, so much anticipation! What's Professor Layton up to? And who's "her?!" Can't wait for the next chapter!
BadPlace chapter 2 . 12/2/2016
Ooh, this was a good chapter! I like your story, by the way!
Ahino94 chapter 1 . 11/1/2016
Oh this is lovely! Will you write more about this? I hope so
The Mocking J chapter 1 . 10/23/2016
It's great to see a fic about Flora and Desmond :D she has all the right to be cautious since he was Descole before... but her swearing did come out of nowhere for me, even if she is seventeen. Oh well, it still made me laugh! I'm intrigued to find out who she reminds him of- is it daughter, or maybe Aurora? Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more if this is updated, especially since Christmas is on its way!