Reviews for An Unexpected Visitor |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Eeeekkkkk, HERE IT COMES! Agh. So. Much. Anticipation. Anyway, I love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how Flora is slowly getting to know Desmond, and I'm curious to find out who she reminds him of! :D |
![]() ![]() i like this so far! im a sucker for the bronev family,,, but listen maybe make the chapters a bit longer? i mean tbh im not 1 to talk but believe me spend a little more time n itll look great ily n i love this |
![]() ![]() GFGXHIDK SUCKS TO BE DESMOND! Aalso yasss go off flora dont take no shit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Augh, so much anticipation! What's Professor Layton up to? And who's "her?!" Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, this was a good chapter! I like your story, by the way! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this is lovely! Will you write more about this? I hope so |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's great to see a fic about Flora and Desmond :D she has all the right to be cautious since he was Descole before... but her swearing did come out of nowhere for me, even if she is seventeen. Oh well, it still made me laugh! I'm intrigued to find out who she reminds him of- is it daughter, or maybe Aurora? Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more if this is updated, especially since Christmas is on its way! |