Please update

Cool story

I absolutely love this story please please please please update please please please please

I miss all of your story updates.

I found this story and it predecessor today. I have read through them and enjoyed your story ideas very much. I only have a couple things that might help with flow and ease of reading.

When you transition between locations and/or people it is sometimes jarring, using some form of divider would help. An example would be: ~~o0o~~

Another jarring/confusing thing is you tend to use "he" or "she" when you transition and do not identify who "he" or "she" is until two or three sentences later, or not at all. Doing that sometimes makes it hard to continue to follow the story.

I am following and eagerly awaiting your next update.

Please update soon

I am excited to know what happens next. Will Harry hold a slight grudge on the Wizarding World? How will they interact and persuade Harry to come back? Will the team go with Harry to Hogwarts? Wait... is this where the Triwizard Tournament happens? The team get more than what they bargained for if that does happen. Please continue writing this is marvelous! I'm hooked

I can't wait to see how Bruce will handle Albus.
Maybe you should have Alfred deal with Dumbledore.

I bet the butler will do it right!

Trash all knowing arrogant Albus Dumbfuck Dumbledore!

Good job so far.

I have to admit that the way you have written Rita is fairly new.

Normally Rita is little better than Delores.

Not a bad chapter and the story is very good. Keep it up and please post again soon.

Read through all the chapters of both this story and it's predecessor, and I have to say, it does have potential. I'm curious to see how Wizarding England will try and bring Harry back into their fold, and if Harry doesn't want to go, how badly things will turn for the ones trying to take him back.

Let me know if you would like any help with this story, I am knowledgeable in both the Harry Potter and DC Comics franchise, so I would be more than willing to help with this story.

Perspective and time change line breaks please!

Could you put linebreaks to show changes in perspective for the first chapter? It is very confusing to try and read.

Omg he's probably panicking sooo friggen hard

I'm quite interested in this story so far! I'm really curious what happened that caused Harry to leave and how exactly he got wrapped up in the justice league too! Thank you so much for writing this! X)