I would say you made Ruby too innocent here.

Indeed. I rather enjoyed this story. Shame that it seems to be dead

This was a very fun story. I'm sorry to see it go.

Good chapter. Weiss has every right to be furious at Ruby and Vahlen. An entire week in solitary confinement would be incredibly psychologically damaging, especially after recently going through a loss (the casualties of the base defence) and immediately being treated like a traitor.

I understand that they had their reasons, but they should have comunicated those reasons to her DURING the confinement.

Also, I somehow doubt that immediately locking someone up for a week would make people LESS suspicious of them. Removing open communication and throwing her in a cell would just help to dehumanize her.

Sorry for the rant. I really did enjoy the chapter overall.

Psionic Weiss? Muahahaha! Combined with her semblance the possibilities are endless.

Good chapter

Good chapter. Ruby and Weiss ad their first fight as a couple ;P

Good chapter.

Good chapter. Wonder how hungover Yang will react to Weiss and Ruby.

Good chapter. Always fun to see Ruby cleave through Berzerkers.

Good chapter. Weiss' new weapon is pretty cool.

Good chapter. I'm a little confused that no one really asked Ruby how she was doing, considering the extent to which a mindfray seems to typically debilitate. Yang's anger was in charcter to a degree, but it should have been outweighed by her concern for Ruby's health.

Good chapter. The white rose blossoms :)

Good chapter

This is pretty good. I'm looking forward to their first op.