‘Smoaks’ lol

any episode with captain cold is my favorite..
made me sad they killed him off at the end of legends season 1

I liked this story so much!

I have read Snowbarry Season 1, Snowbarry Season 2, Snowbarry Season 3, and Snowbarry Season 4 several times. I have also read other stories that you have written several times as well and I find them to be really good. Keep writing.

This is a great story, but I’m curious. Is it actually over or is it just this chapter?

I started reading this story a few days ago and wanting to finish the whole thing before offering any reviews. If you haven't read this story and you want to avoid spoilers you should probably not read any further.

Overall I liked the gradual way that the relationship between Barry and Caitlin progressed, I think such a relationship would've had a larger impact though than just swapping a few lines here and there though. Still it was done rather well. I do have a few complaints which involves the huge amount of errors through all the chapters. Numerous times their, they're, your, you're, etc... were used wrong. A bunch of cases where the writer transcribed incorrect words and phrases from the episodes.

Wow! This is totally awesome... I'm a huge snowbarry fan and i really cried while reading it.. It was so great...you're a great writer more inspiration to u ... Snowbarry for ever

I just remembered something odd, as far as I remember only Kara and Felicity had their clothes set on fire when Barry ran with them. Odd, right?

Great start

I'm excited for your eventual Crisis on Earth-X episode.

Yes. I approve of the name of the great Scarlet Speedster, 'The Steak!' Can I get medium rare instead?

A 'plot twist' to me in this chap would have been ... ...

Barry almost gets killed and Caitlin goes all 'Killer Frost' on Snart's and Mick's asses but Flash stops her from killing the duo, maybe with a kiss, then she can call herself Crystal Frost and she can be a Hero right alongside Barry, that would have been a good 'plot twist'.

I was expecting Joe to say that he knew about them, so no surprise or twist there for me.

Wish you could have saved Bette, she was nice.

Okay I love this story. I truly do. But what irritates the living daylights out of me is not the dialogue or the grammar and spelling mistakes. No it's the constant A/N's. There is no need for them. Especially in the middle of a sentence. Yes it's understandable that you want to put in a thought you want to share, but from what I've seen so far 95% of them were truly irrelevant. If you want to put in a note. Do it at the end of the chapter not in the middle of paragraphs and dialogue. When doing A/N's in the middle of things you bring the reader back to reality and out of the world you have created.

I'm not saying this to be mean but rather to help you in future and possibly remove them to make for a better flow in reading

You are so talented! I've spent all day yesterday and today reading this story and I love it!