Daw, this was so sweet! Love your stories!

Sorry once again, I wasn't sure if you received my last review. If possible, if you allow my vote for the poll, could you change it to Natalie, Temacu, Miki, Cheryl, Charmaine, and Nanette? Here is how you can respond to my question: . Happy Holidays

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Hello, as you can see I'm a guest reviewer. I'm a really big fan of your work. I plan on looking forward to your other works in the future. Please keep up the good work. Also, I'm not a member of this site, but I was wondering if you wouldn't mind if you would allow my votes for the poll? If so my vote is for Natalie, Temacu, Miki, Rhianna, Nanette, and Maya. If not, then I'm okay with it. Thank you once again for all the wonderful stories you put out. Before I forget, here is an possible fic title "How to Meet a Girl Ash style 101." Happy Holidays

Nice work!

Would the plural form for Stalfos not be 'Stalfoses' or 'Stalfosi'?

Anyway; I wonder what you have in mind for the finale.

I see great potential. I hope you continue with the series plus I wonder if any of his pokemon will evolve later on in the story.

Nice.

Nice to see Link!

However, the trio of adventurers you included seemed to be like composite characters of the Three Great Deities and a certain (formerly all-girls) group of adventurers from Rune Soldier.

Are you gonna have Malon ask what 'technology' is only for Ash to refer to it as a machinery-based form of science?
Let just hope that the "TR-io" will not return to use their technological skills to scam and/or threaten innocent people, resulting in them thinking that Team Rocket's machinery is a form of dark magic.

"But something else was rising." Woah! Okay, Ash keep it in your pants. Really liking the story keep it up! Lol

I am surprised that Ash did not ask Malon if whenever she was a human, an elf, or an elf-like human.
Politeness over honesty, I guess.

Then again, he did not notice the pendants that she and her father has.
A dragon-like demon who appears as an ox-like turtle.

Pity that you probably had set this story prior to Link leaving the forest village, otherwise it would have been interesting to see Ash meet Link.
Perhaps Link could teach Ash swordsmanship.

So? Will there be more?

your fanfiction are good but are they going to end like the other ones were instead ash ending with the crossover girl you sometimes make were ash ends or paried with the female in his pokemon universe and if yes its going to suck

1. Will Link appear?

2. You did not give any details regarding the gateway that brought them to Hyrule.

3. Are you going to have Ash go on a quest for the magic spell bestowed upon by the Great Fairies?