This Hiruzen is turning out to be MUCH more of an ASSHOLE than the canon Hiruzen.

I swear. I hate him so much!

And look what his doing! Letting Danzo corrupt his village! Harry up and replace him already with Minato! His the most incompetent Hokage in all history of Hokage!

Just fucking kill Danzo! Aaaarrgghhh I hate that evil scum!
I always believe that he's a pure evil incarnate in the Narutoverse more than Madara and Obito.
He's selfish and only thought of his beliefs! For that, I FUCKING HATE HIRUZEN FOR TURNING A BLIND EYE ON THIS EVIL INCARNATE!

i like dis

baby hands

its so funny cuz i feel like if the piano was just swapped with like a violin or something, i would find the music stuff more interesting. lol but since I've been playing piano all my life I don't really find the piano really cool anymore haha

"Red...fills my dreams..." i'm sorry is that Red Like Roses. That's Red Like Roses. What the heck

AAAAAAHHH WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED IM GONNA SCREAM. THIS WAS A MAJOR MIC DROP A HUGE TURNING POINT AN UNBEARABLE CLIFFHANGER AND YOU PULL THIS SHIT WHYYYY!?

I'll just say one thing, god damn you, Madara Uchiha, you anti-world peace person. And just when Team 7 could have a break after what they went through. (T-T) Though I'm quite happy with Nagato, Yugito, and Konan being saved. (U)

Hasn't it been a decade since her death now? Tomoko is getting overwhelmed by emotions and crying every other paragraph. It's like all she has done since being reborn is avoid thinking about her knowledge and existing maturity at all costs

This reincarnated OC really is a little girl in every sense of the age with the minor addition of those memories she's repressed and not acted on

This was honestly a pleasure to read. Thank you

First of, i found this story by chance and i’ve loved every single part of it. Second of al, someone comparing this to my immortal is a f*cking idiot. Don’t pay attention to that dumbass. Story’s great and take your time cuz writing a story should be something to enjoy, not dread or feel forced to!

hello! just a quick note on the first paragraph, you wrote spring changing into winter, I think you meant autumn changing into winter. that's all, thanks for sharing your story btw, its really cute!

Really good! The only thing that has me irritated is that you keep saying kakashi has silver eyes- it's actually onyx.

I'm sorry if my comment seems rude though. I meant no offense. Sorry, and thank you for all your hard work!

Heeey is it swirlito? Pls tell me swirly got turned into this new Obito. Also, wow. He really was stuck on having Obito...