Reviews for The Pity Party
CatnipCarter chapter 1 . 4/18
Its been two years but I hope you come back to this :D
Girl 973 chapter 5 . 12/16/2018
I love so much your fanfics. It's so WONDERFUL! You are my favorite writting fanfics !
Mind Jack chapter 5 . 10/24/2018
Rushed or not, it's great to see you posting again.
I particularly like the descriptions in this chapter. They're well-done and easy to picture.
TornadoDog33 chapter 5 . 10/23/2018
WOW! This story is amazing! I really like the plot and the way the story was presented. So much drama, and already it's taking a turn for the better. I can almost feel the closure already...

I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep on writing, and keep up the good work!
Icy Kyurem chapter 5 . 10/15/2018
Yes! I've waited so long for this update! XD

This chapter was just so touching. Like I know it just chapter 5 but you described it so well that the readers felt like we understood what pain Circus Baby and the Funtime animatronics were going through.

There is something in this chapter that makes me wonder: That was Ennard, right? Did Myles just fight off Ennard to save Zach? Is he that strong? Or is Ennard weak?

Also...

Hooray! Finally Baby and the gang are free! Granted things aren't going to look pretty in the future but at least they are free! The first step is better than taking no step at all.

This was an absolutely, fantastic chapter. Looking forward to your next update. :)
Eternal Violets chapter 5 . 10/15/2018
Oh. My. God. This is really happening. The feels and happiness. I was literally on the edge and almost crying just reading this. I truly wish to see where this story goes and will follow it for all of eternity. C:
Victor John Foxfire chapter 2 . 10/15/2018
*Counts the Animatronics Baby mentions...* Aw man! No Lolbit or Bonnet! D'X Darn it!
ETERNALKNiGHT6743 chapter 3 . 8/14/2018
I really like this story, because its unique and well written. keep up the good work! Ive been a fan of your fanfics for a while, and I hope you update soon! Its quite refreshing to see a story like this, as most new FNAF fanfics are either unoriginal, or badly written(no offense to anybody out there)
Funfact: Did you know Circus Baby is actually 7.2 feet? All the other SL animatronics are 6 feet and less. Just wanna point it out now before a flamer comes.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/10/2018
Awesome fanfic! I need more Baby x Zach moments though. I have an idea too! When they escape Baby could be watching Zach’s favorite soap opera with him and after that there could be a time skip and it would skip forward to Zack pulling in and calling for Baby and Ballora’s help to carry in groceries, and not the Funtime animatronics since they look like animals, and they got new clothes and stuff and it shows that they turned into a normalish family. Sorry if this makes you mad I just wanted to give you a few ideas!
Guest chapter 4 . 4/8/2018
I need more. This is really good and had me hooked! The plot is unique and I’ve never really imagined that it would happen in any fanfic I would read. The one this I truly need is more Zach and Baby moments. Like watching the soap opera together or something like that! Sorry, I’m a huge shipper, I have a problem... But the story is really good! I hope you continue,
Anonymous chapter 4 . 2/8/2018
What about Funtime Foxy? Btw I ship him with Freddy! XD
Guest chapter 4 . 6/17/2017
Please come out with chapter 5!
Eternal Violets chapter 4 . 5/23/2017
This story is so amazing,I wish I knew about it sooner _ I can't wait until next chapter.
SpectralDreamer chapter 4 . 5/10/2017
Well worth the wait Crazybird.
Life can be quite the burden, such as it is.
Out of all the Sister Location fanfics i've read, I enjoy this the most for the uniqueness you've put into it. And as i've said before, I like how you made this universe and its characters your own. And also naming the Minireenas afters flowers.
Good to hear you'll be continuing, and I hope you enjoy your free time as well; you've earned it.
P.s I hope i'm using that semicolon correctly.
TheMobRapper chapter 4 . 5/10/2017
Yes, it's finally here! I've been so anxious to read chapter 4, and I am not disappointed! You're so great at incorporating emotional sections seamlessly into your stories, a skill of which I envy. This chapter was fantastic, and I especially loved all of the parts with Francis! I absolutely LOVE that name for him, it fits him so well, and I literally laughed out loud at all of his "very"s, ha! Francis is such an intriguing character; how he's a big, scary, bloodthirsty animatronic on the outside, but on the inside, he's almost . . . nothing but a little kid. Hmm . . . Thank you so much for posting this, Crazybird, it made my day to see the notification saying you'd updated this story. You're one of the few great authors on FanFiction, and I highly respect that. Have a great day!
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